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by HumTum is back on August 01, 2006, 05:25:56 PM
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Tum samne jo hote ho to kaif ki barish
Who din bhi the jab aag barasti thi gatha se

‘E dil, unko dekh kar kucch aseey tadpana
Aa jaye hansi unko, jo bathey hai khaffa se

Tassvur mein karta hoon,  unhi se batien
Khushbu unhi ki aati hai humko, hawwa se

Kisi baat par unka nazrien jukha ke sharmana
Gayaal karte hai who humko,  har ik adda se

Khat jo mila unka,  maluum yeh hua humko
Who bhi hamare dewaane ho gaye , zarra se !!
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2006, 05:30:12 PM »
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Tum samne jo hote ho to kaif ki barish
Who din bhi the jab aag barasti thi gatha se

‘E dil, unko dekh kar kucch aseey tadpana
Aa jaye hansi unko, jo bathey hai khaffa se

Tassvur mein karta hoon,  unhi se batien
Khushbu unhi ki aati hai humko, hawwa se

Kisi baat par unka nazrien jukha ke sharmana
Gayaal karte hai who humko,  har ik adda se

Khat jo mila unka,  maluum yeh hua humko
Who bhi hamare dewaane ho gaye , zarra se !!
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wah wah humtum ji bahut dino baad nazar aaye aur kya likha hai aapne aatey hi bahut khoob......... :D
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2006, 11:31:23 PM »
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Shukriya Gesu JI Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2006, 12:46:25 AM »
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bohot achhe humtum !! beautiful!!

barish ki boonden, sard hawaen jab
gaalon ko chhoo kar jaati hain...
teri aahat woh, sansen teri
woh tera halke se choom kar
bikhri laton ko savaarna..
yaad dilaati hain...
har baat mein teri yaad aati hai...
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2006, 08:56:41 AM »
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bahut khoob HumTUM and Sanya ....

aaj bhi barsati hain jab baarish ki boonde
mere dil mein ek kasak si jaga jaati hain

ek leher uthati hai dil mein pyaar ki  
aur fir unki woh bholi si suart aankho mein aa jaati hai

jhaank lete hain woh mere dil ki gehariyon se nikal kar
dil mein unko paane ki tamama si fir se koi uth jaati hai

bheegate mosaum ki yeh thandi si  hawa
aaj kuch sandesh unka hum tak de jaati hai

karte hain hum unka intazaar sadiyon se
kya meri yaad bhi unko kabhi aise tadpaati hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2006, 01:52:46 AM »
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too good Humtum,... Sanya n Ranjana dii....nice replies
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2006, 06:51:45 PM »
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bohot achhe humtum !! beautiful!!

barish ki boonden, sard hawaen jab
gaalon ko chhoo kar jaati hain...
teri aahat woh, sansen teri
woh tera halke se choom kar
bikhri laton ko savaarna..
yaad dilaati hain...
har baat mein teri yaad aati hai...


bahut khoobsuratt sanya ji......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2006, 06:52:36 PM »
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bahut khoob HumTUM and Sanya ....

aaj bhi barsati hain jab baarish ki boonde
mere dil mein ek kasak si jaga jaati hain

ek leher uthati hai dil mein pyaar ki  
aur fir unki woh bholi si suart aankho mein aa jaati hai

jhaank lete hain woh mere dil ki gehariyon se nikal kar
dil mein unko paane ki tamama si fir se koi uth jaati hai

bheegate mosaum ki yeh thandi si  hawa
aaj kuch sandesh unka hum tak de jaati hai

karte hain hum unka intazaar sadiyon se
kya meri yaad bhi unko kabhi aise tadpaati hai


wah wah!!!!!!!!!!!
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