basa............

by mrkotians on June 07, 2006, 11:31:21 PM
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Raag mein hain taal basa
raag taal mein hain bhaav basa
bhaav mein hain geet basa
geet mein hain sangeet basa...

haseena mein hain sharm basa
chamakti aankhon mein aas basa
youvan mein hain moh basa
tan mann mein hain chahat basa...

do mann mein hain preet basa
pati-patni mein hain bandhan basa
madhur milan mein hain prem basa
janm janmon mein hain aatma basa...
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2006, 03:17:37 AM »
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bahut accha likha aapne Manjoo ji............

preet hi duniya ki sabse badi reet hai
bina preet ke jindagi ek adhura geet hai
isko apne dil ki gehariyo.n se gungunaiye
iske bina na koi raag hai na koi sangeet hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2006, 08:37:01 AM »
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Raag mein hain taal basa
raag taal mein hain bhaav basa
bhaav mein hain geet basa
geet mein hain sangeet basa...

haseena mein hain sharm basa
chamakti aankhon mein aas basa
youvan mein hain moh basa
tan mann mein hain chahat basa...

do mann mein hain preet basa
pati-patni mein hain bandhan basa
madhur milan mein hain prem basa
janm janmon mein hain aatma basa...


bohot khub mrkotians ji! bohot achchca likha hai aapne Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2006, 05:52:45 PM »
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shukriya ranjana and superb one.... thanx RWG

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bahut accha likha aapne Manjoo ji............

preet hi duniya ki sabse badi reet hai
bina preet ke jindagi ek adhura geet hai
isko apne dil ki gehariyo.n se gungunaiye
iske bina na koi raag hai na koi sangeet hai
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