BEBASI puch bhaithe...

by raghu1205 on November 11, 2011, 05:54:59 AM
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Wo Mujhse Meri MOHBAT ka SHABAB Puch Bhaithe,
Es DIL Par Apni CHAHAT Ka Aasar Puch Bhaithe....
!  !
Hamne Kaha JAAN Kurban Hai Aap Par,
Wo Apni EK HASI Ki KIMAT Puch Bhaithe...
!  !
Wo Shayad Samjhe Nahi Mera HAL-E-DIL,
KHAMOSH Rahker, Meri BEBASI Puch Bhaithe...
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«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2011, 08:13:21 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2011, 09:12:45 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2011, 02:06:26 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2011, 08:07:53 PM »
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Wo Mujhse Meri MOHBAT ka SHABAB Puch Bhaithe,
Es DIL Par Apni CHAHAT Ka Aasar Puch Bhaithe....
!  !
Hamne Kaha JAAN Kurban Hai Aap Par,
Wo Apni EK HASI Ki KIMAT Puch Bhaithe...
!  !
Wo Shayad Samjhe Nahi Mera HAL-E-DIL,
KHAMOSH Rahker, Meri BEBASI Puch Bhaithe...
****
-R.N.K.

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