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by Sonu on July 15, 2004, 05:33:04 PM
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dal sey toote ker kali khilti nahi,
door sey choot ker pateng udt nahi,
dilber sey beched ker, dilrubaphir hasti nahi.
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2004, 05:42:17 PM »
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I am :D ...
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2004, 05:36:41 AM »
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you are what Ricky ji icon_scratch

do kadem too sab chaltey hai,
per jindgi bhar ka sath koi nahi nebhata,
ager roo ker bhulaee jati yadey,
too hans ker koi gum nahi bhulata.
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2006, 10:33:45 PM »
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nothing.... right....
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2006, 03:51:01 AM »
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Manjoo what is not right... glasses2

::::: sadiyaa lagi humko unko bhulney mey
mager hum unkoo bhulaa naa paye
dil ke lagi hee ehsi thi key
hum unko chaker bhi vapas na bulaa paa paye :::::

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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2006, 05:23:56 PM »
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Manjoo what is not right... glasses2

::::: sadiyaa lagi humko unko bhulney mey
mager hum unkoo bhulaa naa paye
dil ke lagi hee ehsi thi key
hum unko chaker bhi vapas na bulaa paa paye :::::

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nothing.... right....
sonu.... it was asking question... you said what vicky...? I replied nothing... right?Huh?
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2006, 07:21:04 PM »
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Muskura do zara khuda ke vaste,
Sama-e-mahefil mein roshni kam hai,
Tum humhare nahin to kya ghum hai,
Hum to tumhare  hain yeh kya kam hai?
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2006, 04:45:59 AM »
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oh ok ... thanks manjo tu tumney yea per reply keya...

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Manjoo what is not right... glasses2

::::: sadiyaa lagi humko unko bhulney mey
mager hum unkoo bhulaa naa paye
dil ke lagi hee ehsi thi key
hum unko chaker bhi vapas na bulaa paa paye :::::

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nothing.... right....
sonu.... it was asking question... you said what vicky...? I replied nothing... right?Huh?
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2006, 04:50:47 AM »
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Tabrezs ji bahut khoob... nic e likha hia apney...

jub sey eya mehfil suni huyee hum muskurana hum bhul gaye
jub sey jindgi mey andheyra huya hum ujaley ki roshni bhul gaye
hum tumahrey na hu sakey yea gum to kam nahi
per esi bat ka gum ahi key hum tumharey na hu sakey
mangi thi jis bhi dar sey duya tumhey apna banani ki
her dar ney mujhey nakam ker deya
ajj tu humari na hu saki to keya per dil mey pyar key zajbat to kam nahi
to kesi or ki hu chali to keya hum raho mey phool becha dey yea bhi koi kam nahi
doli jaa rhahi hugi teyrey dar sey
phol humey bhi chadey hungey
phark sirf etna huga hum zanajey pey hungey or tum doli mey


 
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Muskura do zara khuda ke vaste,
Sama-e-mahefil mein roshni kam hai,
Tum humhare nahin to kya ghum hai,
Hum to tumhare  hain yeh kya kam hai?
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2006, 10:53:24 AM »
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Aap ne bhi bahoot accha likha Sonu ji....Good work and thanks for de feedback.
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2006, 10:23:12 PM »
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shukriya Tabrez ji... achey likhney valu ko apprication to deyngey hu na.. takey vo or acha likh sakey  Usual Smile...
yeo hi esi tharah likhtey rahu... with wonderful smile...

::::mana key zakhm ko samet ker hum kamosh they,
mager isa matlab yea nahi key hum tum sey anjaan thye,
 tuhmarey afasno per bhi hum muskuraye
mager apney zakhm to tumney nahi dekhaye,
 tumney gharo mey mehkahney saja daley,
mager humney ghar mey ahsow key dariya bhaa daley. :::::


 
 
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Aap ne bhi bahoot accha likha Sonuji....Good work and thanks for de feedback.
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