bepanah pyar karte he tumse...jyuthika....

by jyuthika on October 31, 2013, 08:29:49 PM
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♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫

Bepanah mahobat karte he tumse,

subah sunhari sham sajili meri hoti he tumse,

rishta ye preetka jood gaya jo tumse,

mahefuz rakhenge dilme, lamhe jude jo tumse,

door kabhi na ho payenge tumse,

aakhari sans tak ha pyar karenge tumse...

♫♫ & ♫♫ jyuthika ♫♫ & ♫♫

♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2013, 08:43:58 PM »
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♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫

Bepanah mahobat karte he tumse,

subah sunhari sham sajili meri hoti he tumse,

rishta ye preetka jood gaya jo tumse,

mahefuz rakhenge dilme, lamhe jude jo tumse,

door kabhi na ho payenge tumse,

aakhari sans tak ha pyar karenge tumse...

♫♫ & ♫♫ jyuthika ♫♫ & ♫♫

♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫
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Waaahh jyuthika ... kyaa khoob likha hai... dil se daad
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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2013, 08:45:15 PM »
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very nice acha likhte ho ap bohut keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2013, 09:00:08 PM »
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nyc ,................
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2013, 09:19:44 PM »
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Lovelyyy....
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2013, 09:39:13 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2013, 09:55:13 PM »
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kya baat hai.......
shayad tumhe andaza nahi
koi dushmani nahi vakt ki humse
humari mohobbat ki umar nahi
batao ab tum hi shuru kare kabse......


nice Jyuthika keep writing aap ki poem parhkar achha lagta hai

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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2013, 10:17:31 PM »
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bahot ahcey, waaaaaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2013, 11:19:21 PM »
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♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫

Bepanah mahobat karte he tumse,

subah sunhari sham sajili meri hoti he tumse,

rishta ye preetka jood gaya jo tumse,

mahefuz rakhenge dilme, lamhe jude jo tumse,

door kabhi na ho payenge tumse,

aakhari sans tak ha pyar karenge tumse...

♫♫ & ♫♫ jyuthika ♫♫ & ♫♫

♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2013, 12:41:09 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2013, 02:54:16 AM »
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So sweet ji  :icon_flower  icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2013, 01:21:21 PM »
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Bahut khooooooob...
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2013, 07:37:19 PM »
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thanks thanks thanks to all of u, aap sabko meri writing achhi lagti he or muje aap sabki encouragement , aap sab bhi achha comment karte he , so muje bi likhna achha lagta he. thanks again. have a nice day.
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«Reply #13 on: November 03, 2013, 03:06:57 AM »
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wah bahut khoob jyuthika
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