Beshumar Pyar

by Meena on November 29, 2004, 04:56:51 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: December 03, 2004, 08:42:29 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww

apki kami is kadar mehesoos hoti hai,
ke tanhai me bhi tanhai mehesoos hoti hai.
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #16 on: December 03, 2004, 08:54:57 PM »
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Thanks Meena and all of you 2 for ur kind words................!

I miss the way you'd talk 2 me
and tell me itd be alright.
I ...............I miss how I would always write, "Kelly plus Willie 4ever."
I..................I miss saying, "Kelly Rowley"



Lovebites,won't it be nice if u write somethin of ur own.....y copying others' creations !!
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akela
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«Reply #17 on: December 03, 2004, 09:03:22 PM »
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nice all
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #18 on: December 04, 2004, 03:00:09 PM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!


Shukriya...............!

baghair mere tujhe chain aa nahi sakta...
mera jawaab kaheen se to la nahi sakta...
hazaar parde bhi daal do agar banavat ke...
dilon ki baat to chehre se chhupa nahi sakta...
[you]bana diya hai zamane ne dil ko pathar ka...
sataye koi bhi mujhe ko per rulaa nahi sakta...[/quote
[/you]]

last 2 line r simply the besttttttttt lines i have ever heard!


koi tumhe itna chahe to batana
koi tumhara dard mitaye tu batana
koi tumhara naaz uthaye to batana
dosti kar to lega har koi hamri tarah nibhaye to batana............
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #19 on: December 04, 2004, 03:30:51 PM »
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aapki ada se hum madhosh ho gaye
aap ne palat kar dekha tho hum behosh ho gaye
yehi ek baat kehni thi aapse
na jaane kyun aapko dekthe hi hum khamosh ho gaye


 Puzzled !  Puzzled !
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Meena
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«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2004, 04:59:29 PM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!


koi tumhe itna chahe to batana
koi tumhara dard mitaye tu batana
koi tumhara naaz uthaye to batana
dosti kar to lega har koi hamri tarah nibhaye to batana............


tum bewafa hokar kisi ka pyar bano to batana,
tum zeher do aur koi phir bhi pi le to batana,
agar na mile tume sare jaham me koi aisa,
to dawat hai humare pas phirs se laut ke aajana.
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Rishi
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«Reply #21 on: December 06, 2004, 12:16:39 AM »
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**
kyun tum dil jalaane ki baat karte ho,
hum pe sitam dhaane ki baat karte ho,
jaante ho ke nahin jee paayenge tum bin,
phir kyun sanam durr jaane ki baat karte  ho....
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: December 06, 2004, 05:16:23 PM »
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nice one rishi

 :D
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #23 on: December 07, 2004, 06:20:30 PM »
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aapki ada se hum madhosh ho gaye
aap ne palat kar dekha tho hum behosh ho gaye
yehi ek baat kehni thi aapse
na jaane kyun aapko dekthe hi hum khamosh ho gaye


 Puzzled !  Puzzled !


BEHOSH,KHAAMOSH....lol woh macchhar maarne ki dawaai hogi zaroor !! :twisted:
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immi
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«Reply #24 on: December 07, 2004, 06:34:43 PM »
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Very well said all of u !!!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #25 on: December 08, 2004, 08:36:22 AM »
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aapki ada se hum madhosh ho gaye
aap ne palat kar dekha tho hum behosh ho gaye
yehi ek baat kehni thi aapse
na jaane kyun aapko dekthe hi hum khamosh ho gaye


 Puzzled !  Puzzled !


BEHOSH,KHAAMOSH....lol woh macchhar maarne ki dawaai hogi zaroor !! :twisted:



oh?   :twisted:  :evil:  :twisted:
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sandeepparker
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«Reply #26 on: December 08, 2004, 09:37:41 AM »
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nice ursonly.. kya likha hai..

tumhe chahna meri kamjoori hai..
tumhe pyaar karna meri majboori hai...
kyon nahi samjhati ho meri khamoshi ko..
kya pyaar ka izhaar karna zaroori hai......
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«Reply #27 on: December 08, 2004, 11:56:06 AM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!


koi tumhe itna chahe to batana
koi tumhara dard mitaye tu batana
koi tumhara naaz uthaye to batana
dosti kar to lega har koi hamri tarah nibhaye to batana............


tum bewafa hokar kisi ka pyar bano to batana,
tum zeher do aur koi phir bhi pi le to batana,
agar na mile tume sare jaham me koi aisa,
to dawat hai humare pas phirs se laut ke aajana.


hailaa... kya mast hai meena..  Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #28 on: December 08, 2004, 02:41:31 PM »
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aapki ada se hum madhosh ho gaye
aap ne palat kar dekha tho hum behosh ho gaye
yehi ek baat kehni thi aapse
na jaane kyun aapko dekthe hi hum khamosh ho gaye


 Puzzled !  Puzzled !


BEHOSH,KHAAMOSH....lol woh macchhar maarne ki dawaai hogi zaroor !! :twisted:



oh?   :twisted:  :evil:  :twisted:



haha yeh heart ji khud wohi dawa honge shayad

 :lol:
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Meena
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«Reply #29 on: December 08, 2004, 02:42:18 PM »
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thanx nishita sis

 :D
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