Beshumar Pyar

by Meena on November 29, 2004, 04:56:51 PM
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well well well, this was my sabse pehli poem i wrote during a lecture in the uni  :lol:


aap se acha kaun hai,
yeh abhi tak nahin jan paye hum,
aap dost se bhi kuch zada ban gaye hai,
yeh abhi tak nahin bata paye hum.
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2004, 07:54:56 PM »
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so sweet meena Usual Smile
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lovebites
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2004, 08:53:55 PM »
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Khoob likha hai Meena........!

Udass shamein ujar rastey kabhi bulaye tu loat ana,
Kis c ki anhkon mein raat jagoon k azab aye tu loat ana,

Abhi naye wadion mein naye manzir mein reh lo mager,
Yeh sarey ik ik ker k tum ko chor jaye u loat ana,

Mein roz yun he hawa pe likh likh ker us ki janib behjta hoon,
Keh achey mausam paharoon pe muskurain tu loat ana,

Ager anheroon mein chor ker tum ko bhool jaye tumhare saathi,
Or apni khtir he apne diye jalaye tu loat ana,

Meri woh batain jin pe be-ikhtiar hansa tha khilkhala ker,
Bicherney waley meri woh batain kabhi rolaye tu loat ana.
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husain52
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2004, 07:19:10 AM »
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nice meena and lovebites
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husain52
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2004, 07:38:43 AM »
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Sooni zindagi mein hulchul mehsoos hui…
 Bejaan dil ki aaj dhadkan mehsoos hui….
 Jane kyun aaj aisa laga…
Shayad aapki kami si mehsoos hui….!!
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2004, 04:11:40 PM »
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thanx dosto pasand karne ke liye!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2004, 04:12:12 PM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!
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lovebites
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2004, 05:53:59 AM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!


Shukriya...............!

baghair mere tujhe chain aa nahi sakta...
mera jawaab kaheen se to la nahi sakta...
hazaar parde bhi daal do agar banavat ke...
dilon ki baat to chehre se chhupa nahi sakta...
bana diya hai zamane ne dil ko pathar ka...
sataye koi bhi mujhe ko per rulaa nahi sakta...
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2004, 10:47:24 AM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!


Shukriya...............!

baghair mere tujhe chain aa nahi sakta...
mera jawaab kaheen se to la nahi sakta...
hazaar parde bhi daal do agar banavat ke...
dilon ki baat to chehre se chhupa nahi sakta...
bana diya hai zamane ne dil ko pathar ka...
sataye koi bhi mujhe ko per rulaa nahi sakta...


wahhhhhhh!
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2004, 12:55:42 PM »
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well well well, this was my sabse pehli poem i wrote during a lecture in the uni  :lol:


aap se acha kaun hai,
yeh abhi tak nahin jan paye hum,
aap dost se bhi kuch zada ban gaye hai,
yeh abhi tak nahin bata paye hum.


excellent meena.............lovebites........husain bhai...........bahot khoob......
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2004, 01:11:42 PM »
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sabhi ne achcha likha hai

 glasses2

ASMAN KO NEEND AYE TO SULAEIN KAHAN,
DHARTI KO MAUT AYE TO DAFNAEIN KAHAN,
SAGAR MEIN LAHAR AYE TO CHUPAEIN KAHAN,
HUME AAPKI YAAD AYE TO JAYEN KAHAN
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2004, 08:50:20 AM »
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bahot khoob lovebites  

Chatoon ke phool yeun na khile hote
Kash ke hum tum se khabi na mile hote

Soochte tum ko pehroon soochte lakin
Ankhoon ko no itne sapne diye hote

Ajj tak bhi hai zahan o dill muattar
Kash kahi itne na gull khilee hote

Rooh ke sath aablee bhi hain jism par
Ke teri shidaton main yeun na jale hote

Chhini gayi manzil humain milne se pehle
Ke tere sath yeun door tak na chale hote

Mohabtoon ki bazi har ke jeena sadaf
Tum hote to kab ke marr gye hote  (NM)
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2004, 03:04:03 PM »
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acha likha hai apne lovebites and husain ji!


Shukriya...............!

baghair mere tujhe chain aa nahi sakta...
mera jawaab kaheen se to la nahi sakta...
hazaar parde bhi daal do agar banavat ke...
dilon ki baat to chehre se chhupa nahi sakta...
bana diya hai zamane ne dil ko pathar ka...
sataye koi bhi mujhe ko per rulaa nahi sakta...[/quote
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last 2 line r simply the besttttttttt lines i have ever heard!
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2004, 03:04:47 PM »
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thank u everyone!

 :D
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lovebites
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2004, 06:48:29 PM »
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Thanks Meena and all of u 2 for ur kind words................!

I miss the way you'd talk 2 me
and tell me itd be alright.
I miss the way you'd look at me
and say you'd call me 2nite.
I miss how you would hold my hand
and walk me 2 my class
I miss you saying good bye at the door
then gave me a kiss while everyone passed.
I miss the way you said "I love you"
and I stood there in shock.
I miss the fact that you'd still love me
even if I woudnt talk.
I miss your arm around me
knowing that we were 2gether.
I miss how I would always write, "Kelly plus Willie 4ever."
I miss how I would give you a hug
and you would hug me back.
I miss how we would hold each other
outside on the track.
I miss how all my friends would talk,
and always call me, "Willie"
I miss how everyone else would talk,
and always call you "Kelly"
I miss being able 2 say, "I'll miss you"
but now I cant, u see?
Because I know I already do,
I miss saying, "Kelly Rowley"
I miss thinking you'll always be there,
and I'll always be in your arms,
I miss being with you willie,
and knowing there is no harm.
I miss having a reason,
2 wake up each morning,
but now that we are gone,
instead, I wake up crying.
I miss having a reason,
2 go 2 sleep at nite,
2 know I will wake up,
and everything will be alright.
But the thing I miss the most,
is having a purpose 2 eat,
having a purpose 2 live, at all,
because without you,
I'm incomplete.
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