Be-tarteeb se

by CoolGirl on April 27, 2008, 06:50:15 AM
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Pas aake dekh lun tujhko kareeb se
Hai yehi khuwaish-e-dil mujh gareeb se


Tumhe hi roz soche tumhe hi roz chahe
Ho chaley hain iske shoq kuch ajeeb se


Umeed ka daman tark ker chaley the hum
Miley ho aaj tum mujh ko mere naseeb se


Teri yaadein labon pe muskan sajati hain
Her yaad teri lage mehfil-e-taqreeb se


Tere siwa aur kuch yeh dil sochta nahi
Dekh RANI lafz bhi hogaye be-tarteeb se
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2008, 07:39:58 AM »
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thnx alot janab
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2008, 08:53:55 AM »
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hey wao bahut khoob likha hai aapne
good work
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2008, 11:02:46 AM »
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Pas aake dekh lun tujhko kareeb se
Hai yehi khuwaish-e-dil mujh gareeb se


Tumhe hi roz soche tumhe hi roz chahe
Ho chaley hain iske shoq kuch ajeeb se


Umeed ka daman tark ker chaley the hum
Miley ho aaj tum mujh ko mere naseeb se


Teri yaadein labon pe muskan sajati hain
Her yaad teri lage mehfil-e-taqreeb se


Tere siwa aur kuch yeh dil sochta nahi
Dekh RANI lafz bhi hogaye be-tarteeb se


Coolgirl ji ye mukhda kyalikha hai kutchh samajh se bahar hai......

Pas aake dekh lun tujhko kareeb se
Hai yehi khuwaish-e-dil mujh gareeb se

paas aaker dekh looN......ka matlab bhi wahi hai kareeb se ka bhi mmatlab wahi hai...kya kehna chahte ho...jara batana chaheNge.....?


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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2008, 01:36:07 PM »
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jee mein yeh kehna chahti hun ke mera dil chahta hai ke tujhko paas aake bahut kareeb se dekhna chahta hai yeh isski khuwaish hai i knw inke meanings ek hi hain
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