*~*?? BeWaFa Ko AaKhIrI sAlAaM kYa DeNgE ??*~*

by ghayal_shayar on April 07, 2006, 10:17:08 AM
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ek baar fir se pesh hai ye nacheez ghayal ishq ki anjaan galiyon me,apna ishq me dooba ek nacheez kalaam le kar.bas isi umeed ke saath ki aap sabhi ko humara ye kalaam pasnad aayega.


aaj bhi jab-jab dard hota hai, "ghayal" bas tujhko hi yaad karta hai,jaanta hun tu meri ho nahi sakti, fir bhi dil khuda se fariyaad karta hai......

sach afriyaad karta hai................


to pesh-e-nazaar hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam.............


ek bewafa ko aakhiri salaam kya denge,
dil ke kaatil ko baith ab naam kya denge.

jinke bhi ishq ki maut ho gayi hai aaj,
unhe munawje me hum daam kya denge.

jinke ishq ki subah hi na hui kabhi,
unki zindagi me hum shaam kya denge.

ashk jo baha de is "ghayal" ke aakhir,
aap aisa dard ka paigaam kya denge.

ek tuta hua dil,jisme ab tak pyar ho,
aise dil ko aakhir inaam kya denge.

jo ishq ke nashe me dooba rehta hai,
aise aashiq ke haath jaam kya denge.

kafan baandh jo nikla ho ghar se,
us shakhs ko dusra mukaam kya denge.

zakhmon se chalni laash hua "ghayal",
chahkar bhi aap use aaraam kya denge.
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2006, 04:42:09 PM »
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Fantastic One Ghayal bhai.....Ek ek Shabd dard me piro rakha hai.....Iska jawaab aaj dunga mein araam se.....
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urs4evasomdev
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2006, 08:55:25 PM »
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bauhat acha ghayal ji........

especially my favourite was-
Quote from: "ghayal_shayar"
jo ishq ke nashe me dooba rehta hai,
aise aashiq ke haath jaam kya denge.



Jab pyaar tha, woh lamhe intzaar tha,
Khwaabon ka bahar tha, dard-e-khamoshi tha,

sahi thi zindagi apni..............
kyu? Bewafai mein dard dia tha,
inhi zuban se jhutha vada asani se kia tha,

Kaandhon pe jisne sahara dia tha ,
uske liye ashq bahaya tha,

sahi thi zindagi apni...............
Kyu? Pilake pyala apne pyaar ka,
inhi hoton se nafrat bayan kiya tha,

Ek laash ko jisne zindagi dia tha,
hasi, muskurahat, ek roshan sa chehra diya tha,

sahi thi zindagi apni................
kyu? zubani mohabbat teri ban ke reh gayi,
mujhme ek nasur si ban ke beh gayi.............
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sweety pie
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2006, 10:03:08 PM »
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very well written ghayal!! & urs4evasomdev...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2006, 09:21:43 AM »
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Tere Kadmo ke Nishaan ko.....
Choom ke hum ek Yaad bana denge.....

Teri Bewafai ko iss seene....
Mein daba ke Dard seh lenge.....

Sochta hoon teri bewafai ka....
Hum tujhe inaam kya denge.....

Khushin ko door toh....
Ab Gum ko apne darmiyaan kar lenge....

Par tere aanchal ko.....
Koi aanch na aane denge.....

Bas apni Zindagi bhi teri....
Bewafai ke Naam kar chalenge.....

Sochta hoon teri Bewafai ka....
Hum tujhe Inaam kya denge........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2006, 09:59:20 AM »
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Ghayal, Minu, Gaurav

Very well written !

Gaurav :arrow: Nice reply

Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2006, 10:03:10 AM »
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bahut khoob ghayal ji, minu ji, badnaam ji...
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2006, 10:04:41 AM »
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Thnx Rajbir bhai :!:
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urs4evasomdev
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2006, 10:26:16 AM »
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Thanx sweety pie, Rajbir and Gaurav.........
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2006, 01:03:05 PM »
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bauhat acha ghayal ji........

especially my favourite was-
Quote from: "ghayal_shayar"
jo ishq ke nashe me dooba rehta hai,
aise aashiq ke haath jaam kya denge.



Jab pyaar tha, woh lamhe intzaar tha,
Khwaabon ka bahar tha, dard-e-khamoshi tha,

sahi thi zindagi apni..............
kyu? Bewafai mein dard dia tha,
inhi zuban se jhutha vada asani se kia tha,

Kaandhon pe jisne sahara dia tha ,
uske liye ashq bahaya tha,

sahi thi zindagi apni...............
Kyu? Pilake pyala apne pyaar ka,
inhi hoton se nafrat bayan kiya tha,

Ek laash ko jisne zindagi dia tha,
hasi, muskurahat, ek roshan sa chehra diya tha,

sahi thi zindagi apni................
kyu? zubani mohabbat teri ban ke reh gayi,
mujhme ek nasur si ban ke beh gayi.............


dev sahab pehle to aapka shukraguzar hun ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.aur yakeen maaniye aapki panktiyaan bhi kaafi ahchi hain.umeed hai ki aap aage bhi yunhi humari mehil me shirkat karte rahiyega.
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2006, 01:04:59 PM »
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very well written ghayal!! & urs4evasomdev...


sweetie ji bahut bahut shukriya is kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye aapka.
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2006, 01:09:25 PM »
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Tere Kadmo ke Nishaan ko.....
Choom ke hum ek Yaad bana denge.....

Teri Bewafai ko iss seene....
Mein daba ke Dard seh lenge.....

Sochta hoon teri bewafai ka....
Hum tujhe inaam kya denge.....

Khushin ko door toh....
Ab Gum ko apne darmiyaan kar lenge....

Par tere aanchal ko.....
Koi aanch na aane denge.....

Bas apni Zindagi bhi teri....
Bewafai ke Naam kar chalenge.....

Sochta hoon teri Bewafai ka....
Hum tujhe Inaam kya denge........!!!!!!!!!!!!


gaurav sahab kya kahen hum,aapne to ek saccha aashiq dikha diya apni lines.bas yahi guzarish hai ki yunhi padhte aur likhte rahiye aap.
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2006, 01:11:05 PM »
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Ghayal, Minu, Gaurav

Very well written !

Gaurav :arrow: Nice reply

Rajbir


rajbir sahab bahut bahut shukriya.bas aage bhi yunhi padhte rahiye aap hume.
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2006, 01:12:57 PM »
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bahut khoob ghayal ji, minu ji, badnaam ji...


gesu sahab bahut bahut shukriya is kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye.yahi guzarish hai ki is ghayal mehfil me yunhi aate rahiye aap.
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2006, 01:18:11 PM »
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dev sahab pehle to aapka shukraguzar hun ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.aur yakeen maaniye aapki panktiyaan bhi kaafi ahchi hain.umeed hai ki aap aage bhi yunhi humari mehil me shirkat karte rahiyega.


ghayl_shayr ji aapse ye humari dusri mulakat hai..........
pehle kisi aur site pe bhi hui thi shayd........... dono hi waqt aapne hume ek ladka samjha........ main ek ladki hu baba.......... my name is minu!
dev sahab tho humare bf hai..............
vaise humari urdu aap jaisi achi tho nahi........ par koshish karte hai......
and thank you kyunki humara shayri-andaaz pasand aya.........
hum likhtey rahenge!
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