BHAR LEN ANANT SUKH JEEVAN ME - SARVESH RASTOGI

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YEH SHEETAL MAND-SUGANDH PAWAN CHHOOKAR ANANG KO AATI HAI
KAR KE SPARSH SANDESH MADAN KA ROM-ROM BHAR JATI HAI
                               (Anang = Madan = Kaamdev)

TARU KE PATTON KA MRADU GAAYAN MUJHKO MATWALA KARTA HAI
YEH MAND-MAND BAHTA SARI-JAL UTSAH HRADAYA ME BHARTA HAI
                                   (Sari-Jal = River)

RAVI BAHU-PASH ME BADDHA LALIMA MUJHKO PAGAL KARTI HAI
NISHI KE ANCHAL KI CHHAYA MUJHME AJAB NASHA SA BHARTI HAI

AB MUJHSE NAHIN RAHA JATA HE PRIYE NA AANKHEN BAND KARO
YEH BELA HAI SUKH RASHI KHOL DO JEEVAN ME ANAND BHARO

TRISHNA SE TAPTE ADHARON KI AAO PRIYE PYAS BUJHA DEN HUM
TAN-MAN ME JALTI JWALA KA AAO KUCHH TAAP GHATA DEN HUM

HAIN BAHU-KAPAAT KHULE MERE AAO PRIYETAM AALINGAN ME
SAB BANDH TOD DO PRAN-PRIYE BHAR LEN ANANT SUKH JEEVAN ME

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यह शीतल मंद सुगंध पवन छूकर अनंग को आती है
कर के स्पर्श सन्देश मदन का रोम रोम भर जाती है

तरु के पत्तों का मृदु गायन मुझको मतवाला करता है
यह मंद मंद बहता सरि जल उत्साह ह्रदय में भरता है

रवि बाहुपाश में बद्ध लालिमा मुझको पागल करती है
निशि के अंचल की छाया मुझमे अजब नशा सा भरती है

अब मुझसे नहीं रहा जाता हे प्रिये न आँखें बंद करो
यह बेला है सुखराशिः खोल दो जीवन में आनंद भरो

तृष्णा से तपते अधरों की आओ प्रिय प्यास बुझा दें हम
तन मन में जलती ज्वाला का आओ कुछ ताप घटा दें हम

हैं बाहू-कपाट खुले मेरे आओ प्रिएतम आलिंगन में
सब बन्ध तोड़ दो प्राणप्रिये भर लें अनंत सुख जीवन में

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2009, 08:31:33 AM »
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YEH SHEETAL MAND-SUGANDH PAWAN CHHOOKAR ANANG KO AATI HAI
KAR KE SPARSH SANDESH MADAN KA ROM-ROM BHAR JATI HAI
                               (Anang = Madan = Kaamdev)

TARU KE PATTON KA MRADU GAAYAN MUJHKO MATWALA KARTA HAI
YEH MAND-MAND BAHTA SARI-JAL UTSAH HRADAYA ME BHARTA HAI
                                   (Sari-Jal = River)

RAVI BAHU-PASH ME BADDHA LALIMA MUJHKO PAGAL KARTI HAI
NISHI KE ANCHAL KI CHHAYA MUJHME AJAB NASHA SA BHARTI HAI

AB MUJHSE NAHIN RAHA JATA HE PRIYE NA AANKHEN BAND KARO
YEH BELA HAI SUKH RASHI KHOL DO JEEVAN ME ANAND BHARO

TRISHNA SE TAPTE ADHARON KI AAO PRIYE PYAS BUJHA DEN HUM
TAN-MAN ME JALTI JWALA KA AAO KUCHH TAAP GHATA DEN HUM

HAIN BAHU-KAPAAT KHULE MERE AAO PRIYETAM AALINGAN ME
SAB BANDH TOD DO PRAN-PRIYE BHAR LEN ANANT SUKH JEEVAN ME

SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE 9810391523


bahut accha.... As usual... Expect more and more from you like this Sarvesh Rastogi ji.
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2009, 08:44:53 AM »
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bahut khoob sarvesh ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 06:37:28 PM »
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Shukriya Roja Ji
Hindi Sahitya me Shrangar Ras ka vishesh sthan hai.  Shrangar ko Rasraj kaha gaya hai.  Ishq, husn, dard, sanyog, viyog ye sabhi Shrangar ke hi parts hain.  Naturally shrangar ras per kavi ka hath badi efficiently chalta hai.  Meri rachnaon me bhi shrangar ras pradhan rahta hai.  Aap jaankar hain literature ki bariki ko khoob pahchanti hain.  Encouragement ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.  Aapki post ki hui rachnaen bhi behad khubsurat hoti hain.  You are promoting the literature, Thanks.
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2009, 12:41:42 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Sarvesh Bhai.. Kamaal Likhte hain aap..!! Bahut Kam Padhne ko Milti Hai aajkal Suddh Hindi Me Itni Sundearta... ek ek Lafz Pyaar Me Bheega Hai.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooooooooooob Sarvesh Bhai.. Daad kubool karen.. Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2009, 10:09:50 PM »
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YEH SHEETAL MAND-SUGANDH PAWAN CHHOOKAR ANANG KO AATI HAI
KAR KE SPARSH SANDESH MADAN KA ROM-ROM BHAR JATI HAI
                               (Anang = Madan = Kaamdev)

TARU KE PATTON KA MRADU GAAYAN MUJHKO MATWALA KARTA HAI
YEH MAND-MAND BAHTA SARI-JAL UTSAH HRADAYA ME BHARTA HAI
                                   (Sari-Jal = River)

RAVI BAHU-PASH ME BADDHA LALIMA MUJHKO PAGAL KARTI HAI
NISHI KE ANCHAL KI CHHAYA MUJHME AJAB NASHA SA BHARTI HAI

AB MUJHSE NAHIN RAHA JATA HE PRIYE NA AANKHEN BAND KARO
YEH BELA HAI SUKH RASHI KHOL DO JEEVAN ME ANAND BHARO

TRISHNA SE TAPTE ADHARON KI AAO PRIYE PYAS BUJHA DEN HUM
TAN-MAN ME JALTI JWALA KA AAO KUCHH TAAP GHATA DEN HUM

HAIN BAHU-KAPAAT KHULE MERE AAO PRIYETAM AALINGAN ME
SAB BANDH TOD DO PRAN-PRIYE BHAR LEN ANANT SUKH JEEVAN ME

SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE 9810391523


It is indeed a very beautiful piece of work.......Bohot Khoob Sarvesh Ji......Bohot hu sundar likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2009, 10:12:41 PM »
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As always, Very beautifully written Sarvesh Ji...
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bahut khoob sarvesh ji. Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2009, 10:59:04 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Sarvesh Bhai.. Kamaal Likhte hain aap..!! Bahut Kam Padhne ko Milti Hai aajkal Suddh Hindi Me Itni Sundearta... ek ek Lafz Pyaar Me Bheega Hai.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooooooooooob Sarvesh Bhai.. Daad kubool karen.. Applause Applause Applause


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Bahut bahut Shukriya Maan Ji
Aapki Daad me bhi jadoo hai.  Aap jaise senior shayar jab tarif karte hain to khud per garv hone lagta hai.  I am so grateful.  Isi tarah hausla badhate rahiye. icon_salut

CHAHE IKRAR NA KAR PYAR SE HI DEKH IDHAR
EK NAZAR BHAR KI TALABGAAR JAAN HAMARI HAI

Thanks a lot Mann Sb

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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 10:35:13 PM »
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It is indeed a very beautiful piece of work.......Bohot Khoob Sarvesh Ji......Bohot hu sundar likha hai aapne.

Shukriya Celmira Ji
Jin alfaz me aapne tarif ki, dil bagh bagh ho gaya,
Thanks a lot
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 10:49:53 PM »
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sarvesh ji
bahut undha ghazal ko anzaam diya hai
daad qabool karain
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2009, 11:23:43 PM »
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kuch shabd hi nahi hai joh aap ki tareef sahi kar sakey.... but just that, you are marvelous....


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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2009, 08:20:20 PM »
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Bahoooooot Bahut shukriya Jasbir Ji
Aapse Daad pakar dil bagh bagh ho gaya
Lot of thanks
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«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2009, 08:14:44 AM »
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Shukriya Roja Ji
Hindi Sahitya me Shrangar Ras ka vishesh sthan hai.  Shrangar ko Rasraj kaha gaya hai.  Ishq, husn, dard, sanyog, viyog ye sabhi Shrangar ke hi parts hain.  Naturally shrangar ras per kavi ka hath badi efficiently chalta hai.  Meri rachnaon me bhi shrangar ras pradhan rahta hai.  Aap jaankar hain literature ki bariki ko khoob pahchanti hain.  Encouragement ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.  Aapki post ki hui rachnaen bhi behad khubsurat hoti hain.  You are promoting the literature, Thanks.
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Bahut sahi kaha Sarvesh Rastogi ji.. Ishq, dard, husn, sanyog viyog sabhi shringar ke hi ek hissa hai. Bahut kam log aap jaisa poora poora hindi ke prayog karte hai. Mujhe bahut pasand hai, aur mujhe aap jaisa likhna nahi aata. Isliye aapka kavita padkar bahut kuch seekh bi leti hu.
Yo pe aap aaye yeh hamara saubagya hai. Keep sharing  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2009, 10:32:06 PM »
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As always, Very beautifully written Sarvesh Ji...

So kind of you Angel ji
Shukriya
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