bhula to na doge

by saahill on April 03, 2012, 03:13:21 AM
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karo ek waada kabhi daghaa to na doge
zindagi ke kisi pal mein bhula to na doge

aa jayein laakh toofan is pyar ke sagar mein
safine par akela mujhe chorh to na doge

hoti hai daghar kanteelee mohabat ki manjil ki
beech raste mein hi sath chorh to na doge

yeh maanlo ke tumse hi hai mere jism mein jaan
meri saanson ka mere jism se naaa torh to na doge

aadat hai ab to teri panahon mein jeene ki
kabhi kisi mehfil mein tanha chorh to na doge

karo ek wadda kabhi daghaa to na doge
zindagi ke kisi pal mein mujhe bhula to na doge

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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 04:02:33 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 07:04:13 AM »
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karo ek waada kabhi daghaa to na doge
zindagi ke kisi pal mein bhula to na doge

aa jayein laakh toofan is pyar ke sagar mein
safine par akela mujhe chorh to na doge

hoti hai daghar kanteelee mohabat ki manjil ki
beech raste mein hi sath chorh to na doge

yeh maanlo ke tumse hi hai mere jism mein jaan
meri saanson ka mere jism se naaa torh to na doge

aadat hai ab to teri panahon mein jeene ki
kabhi kisi mehfil mein tanha chorh to na doge

karo ek wadda kabhi daghaa to na doge
zindagi ke kisi pal mein mujhe bhula to na doge


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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2012, 10:48:47 AM »
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bahut badiya sahiil ji...
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 02:00:10 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2012, 06:21:52 PM »
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thx saini ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2012, 03:12:38 AM »
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thx shahjada ji
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