bichadne ka gum kaisa....

by rita mal on June 24, 2013, 06:18:16 PM
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jab mile hi nahin to bichadne ka gum kaisa
do lafz bhi nahin bole to ilzaam-e-sitam kaisa...

karte hein wo dua to din bhar jataate hein
humne sajda kiya unhen, to bharam kaisa...

likh ke haal-e-dil sunana hume khoob aata hai
haan, sayahi me lahu na mile to wo kalam kaisa....

umr beet gayi magar fir bhi umr dhali nahin
jo bhool gaya waqt dhale wo sanam kaisa...

apno ko to koi apna thaam hi leta hai gum mein
jo haath na thaame gairo ka to wo karam kaisa

koi khuda nahi basta mandir o masjid mein
jahan insaan nahi rahta wo dair-o-haram kaisa
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 06:41:04 PM »
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Bahot khoob...
likh ke haal-e-dil sunana hume khoob aata hai
haan, sayahi me lahu na mile to wo kalam kaisa....
Waaaaaah...
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2013, 07:41:15 PM »
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jab mile hi nahin to bichadne ka gum kaisa
do lafz bhi nahin bole to ilzaam-e-sitam kaisa...

karte hein wo dua to din bhar jataate hein
humne sajda kiya unhen, to bharam kaisa...

likh ke haal-e-dil sunana hume khoob aata hai
haan, sayahi me lahu na mile to wo kalam kaisa....

umr beet gayi magar fir bhi umr dhali nahin
jo bhool gaya waqt dhale wo sanam kaisa...

apno ko to koi apna thaam hi leta hai gum mein
jo haath na thaame gairo ka to wo karam kaisa

koi khuda nahi basta mandir o masjid mein
jahan insaan nahi rahta wo dair-o-haram kaisa

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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2013, 08:07:50 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2013, 08:48:22 PM »
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Bahut achhi peshkash rahi..daad rau ke sath qubool kare..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2013, 09:34:10 PM »
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bohat khoob,..........
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2013, 10:46:10 PM »
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jab mile hi nahin to bichadne ka gum kaisa
do lafz bhi nahin bole to ilzaam-e-sitam kaisa...

karte hein wo dua to din bhar jataate hein
humne sajda kiya unhen, to bharam kaisa...

likh ke haal-e-dil sunana hume khoob aata hai
haan, sayahi me lahu na mile to wo kalam kaisa....

umr beet gayi magar fir bhi umr dhali nahin
jo bhool gaya waqt dhale wo sanam kaisa...

apno ko to koi apna thaam hi leta hai gum mein
jo haath na thaame gairo ka to wo karam kaisa

koi khuda nahi basta mandir o masjid mein
jahan insaan nahi rahta wo dair-o-haram kaisa
 
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 02:57:28 AM »
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rita ji ,,kya khubsurat nazm se nawaza hai aapne ..bahut hi shandar peshkash rahi aapki sabhi aasaariib pe daad kabul karen,,,aur likhti rahen
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 05:26:52 AM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Rita ji,
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 07:09:34 AM »
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Bahut khoob..
bahut badhiya peshkash
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 03:03:30 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2013, 10:55:24 PM »
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waah kyaa kehne Rita ji.... dil khush ho gayaa padh ke... bahut pyaari peshkash... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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