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Nigahon se dil mein ghar karke
mere khawabon ki HAQIQAT ho gaye ho tum
Ishq ke safar ki manjil banke
meri bekhudi ki WAJAH ho gaye ho tum
mere hatho ki mahandi banke
mere rooh ki MAHAK ho gaye ho tum
utre ho dil mein sukoon banke
meri khamoshiyon ki DHADKAN ho gaye ho tum
palakon ke noor aftaab se banke
dil ko azeez wo SHAKS ho gaye ho tum
meri chahaton ki arju banke
sanso ki bepanah HASARAT ho gaye ho tum
gaharaiyon mein mujhe yaad karke
meri pyas ke SAMNDAR ho gaye ho tum
apni chahato ka ijahar karke
mere be-karaar afasano ki GAZAL ho gaye ho tum
meri betabiyon ki khud ko wajah samjhke
ab jaan lo jana mere
BE-KARAAR meri tarah ho gaye ho tum.....
bekaraar........
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2006, 02:00:27 PM » |
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boaht khoob likha hai chitra ji WELCOME TO YOINDIA!!!  |
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chitra
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2006, 02:09:58 PM » |
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THANKS MAHAKJI !!
Kuchh nagme gazlon ke likh rahi hoon
apsee banne ki ye koshish
pahali bar kar rahi hoon
apki hosala afajahi ka
Ahasaas tahe dil se kar rahi hoon
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2006, 03:56:04 PM » |
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sher-o-shayariyon ka rang
ab yoindia mein bhad raha hai
mehek ji ki hausala afzahi se hi to
shayaron ko khumar chad raha hai
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chitra
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2006, 04:17:42 PM » |
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kya kare ?
jab se yoindia pe nazar lagai hai
nagamo ke liye badi khoobsurat si sham payi hai
aap jaise shumaro ki mahfil mein
humne apni mahafil sajaai hai
ye mahafile banaye rakhana
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anand_modani
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2006, 05:43:51 AM » |
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mehfil sajaye rakhane ka hum tum se karte hai wada
yoindia walon ka karte hai dhanyawad sabse zyada
ki unhone itni khubsurat mehfil ko sazaya hai
tabhi to humne aap jaisa ek accha dost paya hai
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2006, 05:47:29 AM » |
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Very nice guys...Its really nice to know that new members are writing such wonderful stuff...hats off to u, Anand sahab..gr8 going chitra jiii and mehek is always good...
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2006, 07:04:37 AM » |
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THANKS SD JI
I M JUST EIGHTEEN SO DONT USE JI WITH MY NAME
PLS........
!!!!THANKS A LOT FOR UR ENCOURAGEMENT!!!!
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chitra
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2006, 01:44:07 PM » |
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~:THANKS TO ALL :~
SHAYAR_DILDAR JI..
kyon meri shayari ke dildar bane baithe ho
kyon meri chahaton ke hakdaar bane baithe ho
dil to pahle se hi apke ashiyane mein aa gaya thaa
Ea shayar_dildar kyon intzar kiye baithe ho.
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2006, 01:52:56 PM » |
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waah Chitra ( Sen ) ji .... nice start !!
Malum hai ke dil aap ka hamare ashiyaane mein rehta hai
phir bhi aap ki zubaan se izhaar e ishq sun-na chahte hai
suna hai ke ishq dewana kar det ahai sab ko "Chitra"
aaj hum uss dewangi ki haad se guzarana chahte hai !!
Welcome to yoindia !!
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2006, 02:12:46 PM » |
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gr888 going friends,,,, keep it up!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2006, 02:21:07 PM » |
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HUM-TUM JI.........
***kya khoob pahachana hai apne hame...!!! ***
Izaazat hai apko diwaangee ki had se gujar jane ki
humari chahto mein apna jahaan basaane ki
par itna kaeeb bhi mat aana ke "hum-tum" mein kho jaye
kanhi behoshi mein nazdikiyon ke dayre na chhutt jaye
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2006, 02:42:20 PM » |
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Chitra ji !!!
aa ke aaj dewangi ki haad se guzar jaye
Hum, Tum ho jao Tum, Hum Ho jaye
na koi fansla rhey darmiya dono ke
khubhu ban ke hum ik duuje mein kho jaye!!
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2006, 03:52:44 PM » |
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Chitra ji !!!
aa ke aaj dewangi ki haad se guzar jaye
Hum, Tum ho jao Tum, Hum Ho jaye
na koi fansla rhey darmiya dono ke
khubhu ban ke hum ik duuje mein kho jaye!! very nice hum tum and chitra good going |
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«Reply #14 on: March 07, 2006, 04:10:46 PM » |
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Good going Chitra and HumTum ji!!!!
Chahaty aise bhi hogi, yah kabhi socha na tha
Wo muskura rahein hogy mujhme
ajj mera wazood mujh mai na tha!!!
Ek gazal hai ussi ki lines deemag mai aai to yah likh diya!!!
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