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«Reply #30 on: June 22, 2006, 07:05:51 AM » |
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nice fahi..........
dil mein mere koi aaj fir saharat si hai,
jagi aaj dil mein fir se mohabat si hai
dil keh raha hai ki aaj kuch keh de tujhko chupke se
aaj tere dil ne fir se mere dil ko chori ki hai
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«Reply #31 on: June 22, 2006, 02:15:15 PM » |
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are nahi SSSS SHAHID JI baat toh chori ki ho gayi na.........  aacha likha aapne........Sangy dear aacha bolo bache ko....... kisn aaj kaano mein thaa chupke se kaha dil mera joro se dharka aur saans wahi tham gaya nazre jab chupke se milne lagi mehfil mein toh hamne apne rukh per parda shramo haya ka daal liya
Hamme chane wala sabhi tere jaisa yaar ho
Ranz-na rahe phir kisi ko
Jab sab ke paas tere jaisa dildar ho.... :D shukria ranz-na ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wink: Aur dekha ,tumhare kehte hii sangeetha ji ne bhi tarifo ke phul ban dii hamare khatiir :wink: |
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ranjana
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«Reply #32 on: June 22, 2006, 04:31:20 PM » |
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:D shukriya SSshshs....... tum toh baate bahut banate ho chori chori hamare dil mein base jaate ho karte ho na jaane har kisi ke naam ke saath kya -kya sabka dil apni baato se jeet jaate ho............ :lol: |
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«Reply #33 on: June 22, 2006, 07:09:17 PM » |
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:D shukriya SSshshs....... tum toh baate bahut banate ho chori chori hamare dil mein base jaate ho karte ho na jaane har kisi ke naam ke saath kya -kya sabka dil apni baato se jeet jaate ho............ :lol: Aare wah wah ranz-na jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kya baat hein,baaton baaton mein etna izzat,ham shukrguzar hein tumharein. :D Yeh to tumhara ehsaan hein ke tumne jitne ka mouka diya
Aaj kal kambakht is duniyawalo mouka hii kaha dete hein... |
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«Reply #34 on: June 23, 2006, 07:28:12 AM » |
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:D shukriya SSshshs....... tum toh baate bahut banate ho chori chori hamare dil mein base jaate ho karte ho na jaane har kisi ke naam ke saath kya -kya sabka dil apni baato se jeet jaate ho............ :lol: Aare wah wah ranz-na jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kya baat hein,baaton baaton mein etna izzat,ham shukrguzar hein tumharein. :D Yeh to tumhara ehsaan hein ke tumne jitne ka mouka diya
Aaj kal kambakht is duniyawalo mouka hii kaha dete hein...Hmmmmmmmmmm :D |
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ranjana
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«Reply #35 on: June 23, 2006, 07:28:13 AM » |
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jinhone ki thee hamare dil ki chori
ab woh raato ko hamari neende bhi churane lage
kiye they vaade unhone hamse roz milne ke
isliye woh ab hamare khawabo mein bhi aane lage
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«Reply #36 on: June 23, 2006, 11:31:15 AM » |
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very nice saheed & ranjana.........
chori chori chupke chupke jab raat ne shaam ko apne sarfaroshi mai lena suru kiya
tab neend ke terte hue armaano ne uski yaadon ke saath mujhe phir agoshi mai liya...........
aur phir..................
khawobo ki nagri mai jaise hi mai pahucha
ek saya sa meri ruh ko chukar nikal gaya
jaise mujhme samane ko aaya tha woh
per dheere se apna rasta badal gaya......
ahsaas karke us saaye ka pal bhar ke liye
dil mera madhoshi ke sagar mai dubne laga
aaj kho jau yahi ,reh jau sada ke liye isi nagar mai
jaise chupke se ye mujhse hi kehne laga
aur woh saaya...........jo aaya tha mujhme samane ke liye ,jane kaha chup gaya tha
sayad kuch jaadu tha uske jehan mai ,jo mujhe nasha sa de gaya tha....
mai der tak wahi khada raha phir uske intzaar mai.
har makaan ,har band khirki per meri nazar use hi dhoondti rahi
kaha chip gaya hai woh udake mere hosh ,behti hawao se ye poochti rahi.
per ...........per woh saaya phir na aaya.jaane kitni lamhe maine uski yaad mai bita diye the,jaane kitne armaan dil mai saja liye the.
per woh sirf ek hawa ki tarah mujhe chukar yu gum ho gaya ki phir kahi na mila,.
aur mai .......mai to jaise khawabo mai bhi lutne ka karne laga gila.
aur subah ko phir karke yaad us khawab ko mai dil hi dil sochne ko majboor hua.
ki aakhir aisi kya khata kari thi maine jo uska saaya mere khawao se bhi door hua.
...............@fahi@.................
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«Reply #37 on: June 23, 2006, 11:52:34 AM » |
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=D> superbbbb......bahut khub fahi........ mera manpasand subject saaya........accha laga pad ke..... woh ek saya hai jo kabse mere jehan per chhaaya hai aata hai raato ko chupke chupke woh karta hai mujhe jee bhar ke pyaar karta hai mujhe baate anokhee aur de jaata hai apna dher sa dular meri aankho mein usi ka toh sarur hai har pal mera dil usi ke pyaar mein chur hai ek wahi hai jisne mera saath nibhaya hai usi ne toh chori se chupke se mera dil churaya hai |
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«Reply #38 on: June 23, 2006, 12:07:54 PM » |
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sukriya & nice ranjana ji.................aur haan ye 'SAAYA' sabd meri zindagi se juda hua hai,bus isliye hi ise hamesha yaad rakhta hu.........bahut khaas hai ye.
deker deedar mujhe mere sabr-e-fal ka
tarasti aankhon ke deker chain do pal ka,
gum ho gaya tera saaya hawa mai kahi
phir milne ka mujhse karke vaada kal ka
.....................@fahi@..........................
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«Reply #39 on: June 23, 2006, 12:15:50 PM » |
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good......aacha laga jaan ke.......
yeh saaya hai ya mere dil ki thee maya
jab bhi dekha tanha khud ko usko apne sang paaya
kar gaya woh na jaane kya jadu mujhe per
apne har sukh dukh mein maine usko hi saath paaya
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«Reply #40 on: June 23, 2006, 12:28:39 PM » |
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lagta hai humne topic hi badal diya, ....chalo acha hi hai....gud1 ranjana ji............ dard ke badlo se ghirkar bhi ,dil na ek pal ko kabhi ghabraya mera kyunki janta hu tu chal rahi hai harpal saath Sanjna banke saaya mera .................@fahi@................. good......aacha laga jaan ke.......
yeh saaya hai ya mere dil ki thee maya
jab bhi dekha tanha khud ko usko apne sang paaya
kar gaya woh na jaane kya jadu mujhe per
apne har sukh dukh mein maine usko hi saath paaya |
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ranjana
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«Reply #41 on: June 23, 2006, 12:34:56 PM » |
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hum bhi apni diwanagi mein na jaane kya kya kar jaate hain
thaa yeh subject chori chori ka ,hum saaya per likhe chale jaate hain
kuch der yeh mehfil bhatak gayi thee rasta ,dosto hum maaffi chahate hain
lijiye fir karte hain chori chupke pyaar ki baate
aur aapke dil ko fir se.....churate hain....... :D :D
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«Reply #42 on: June 23, 2006, 12:40:12 PM » |
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ye to funny shayri thi ji............sach mai 2 gud.........now topic per chalte hai........
woh aur honge jinhone choriyo per kare sikwa
hum to dil ko chori karane ka bahana talashtey hai
...............@fahi@..................
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«Reply #43 on: June 23, 2006, 04:22:12 PM » |
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dil jab dene ho de deejiye hazur
kahi yeh moka haath se nikal na jaaye
ker do ishara apne dilbar ko jaldi se
kahi unka dil koi aur chori se le na jaaye
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«Reply #44 on: June 23, 2006, 04:28:59 PM » |
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Wah kya baat hai Fahi and Ranju
Dil Chura ke Dekh mera......
Hum khud Maut gale lagayenge.....
jo tu dekhegi mudkar kabhi....
Hum Jannat me bhi tere peeche nazar ayenge......
Dil chuaraya hai tune mera ab bol kya Saja doon tujhe.....
Zindagi jeeni sikhayi tune ab bol kya Hukm hai mujhe......!!!!!!!!!
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