*~Chupke Chupke Unko~*

by honeyrose on December 03, 2008, 11:26:43 PM
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Chupke chupke unko dekhte hain
Unke likha hua paigaan padhte hain

Unse muhabatt karte karte hosh kho baithe hain
Unse milne ki tamana dil mein rakhte hain

Pairon tale zameen kho baithe hain
Aasmaan ko chune ki tamana rakhte hain

Chupke chupke unko aapna banana ka sapna dekhte hain
Unse mulaaqaton ki umeed iss dil mein chupaye rakhe hain

________honeyrose________
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2008, 11:35:10 PM »
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Pairon tale zameen kho bhaithe hain
Aasman ko chune ki tamanna rakhte hain

Bohat khoob Honey yeh 2 line its just amazing.....

Arey nadaan hum agar rehte hain dil me tere
To badle me tujhe bhi apne dil me rakhte hain

                   -SG-
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2008, 11:42:47 PM »
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Pairon tale zameen kho bhaithe hain
Aasman ko chune ki tamanna rakhte hain

Bohat khoob Honey yeh 2 line its just amazing.....

Arey nadaan hum agar rehte hain dil me tere
To badle me tujhe bhi apne dil me rakhte hain

                   -SG-

Thank you Sajid ji... notworthy
Wah bohat achchi lines likhi hai aapne...



Dil de chuke hai tumare dil mein ghar banate hain
Tumse ishq hua tha jab dil mein milne ki hasrat rakhte hain

________HR________
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2008, 11:53:16 PM »
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Nice one HR Ji
Aur ghayel Ji ki adaa bhi hume pasad aayee
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2008, 09:38:50 PM »
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Thank you Rajesh ji...
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2008, 12:24:46 AM »
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nice honey and SG
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2008, 01:50:39 AM »
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Thank you Pooja....
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