Dard E dIL

by mnfardeen on August 06, 2004, 08:02:52 PM
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PESHANI E HAYAT ME  KUCH AYESE  BAAL PADHE
HAAS NE KO JIJO CHAHATO ANSOO NIKAL PADHE
RHENEDO NA BUJHA O MERI ASHIYEN KI YAAD
ISE KASHMAKASH ME AP KA DAMAN NAJAAL PADHE
ES TARHA KI HAQIQAT ME RAHE ASHK E GHAAM
JO DUSRA JO PIYE GA TO KALEJA NIKAL PADH HE m:ail  
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    «Reply #1 on: August 06, 2004, 08:07:19 PM »
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    PESHANI E HAYAT ME  KUCH AYESE  BAAL PADHE
    HAAS NE KO JIJO CHAHATO ANSOO NIKAL PADHE
    RHENEDO NA BUJHA O MERI ASHIYEN KI YAAD
    ISE KASHMAKASH ME AP KA DAMAN NAJAAL PADHE
    ES TARHA KI HAQIQAT ME RAHE ASHK E GHAAM
    JO DUSRA JO PIYE GA TO KALEJA NIKAL PADH HE m:ail  
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      ap ne tu mera dil ke qareeb aur bhi agaye


      mujhe shaeri tu nahi atti werna mai ap ke liye sheroun ki line laga detti

      plz mail me  zeaye 2001@yahoo.com mujhe ap ke mail ka inttezar rahega :queen:
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      «Reply #2 on: August 07, 2004, 09:42:58 AM »
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      karti hai kamal shayari aapki,
      e-mail karne ko kehti hain ladkiyan sari...!!

      kehte hain hum, bura na maniyega,
      andaz hai humara, adaab farmaiyega..!!
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      «Reply #3 on: September 17, 2011, 10:16:53 AM »
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      main mnfardeen ji ka likha ye kalaam saaf-saaf likh raha hoon. mujhe pasand aaya.aap ko bhi zaroor pasand aaye gaa.




                       pareshani-e-hayaat mein kuch aise bal pade.
                       hans ne ko jo jee chahaa aansu nikal pade.

                       rahne do na bujhao meri aashiqi ki yaad.
                       iss kashmakash mein aapka daaman na jal pade.

                       issi tarah ki haqiqat mein rahe ashq-e-ghamm.
                       gar doosra jo piye to kalejaa nikal pade
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      «Reply #4 on: September 17, 2011, 10:18:07 AM »
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      PESHANI E HAYAT ME  KUCH AYESE  BAAL PADHE
      HAAS NE KO JIJO CHAHATO ANSOO NIKAL PADHE
      RHENEDO NA BUJHA O MERI ASHIYEN KI YAAD
      ISE KASHMAKASH ME AP KA DAMAN NAJAAL PADHE
      ES TARHA KI HAQIQAT ME RAHE ASHK E GHAAM
      JO DUSRA JO PIYE GA TO KALEJA NIKAL PADH HE m:ail   [b][i][size=24px][/size][img][/img][list]
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        niche inke kalaam ko saaf saaf likha hai wahi padhein
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        «Reply #5 on: September 17, 2011, 10:21:56 AM »
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        MN fardeen jee
        Bahut khoob.
        spelling mistakes Adil bhai ne sahi kar di hai. Ab iska lutf uthaiye.
        Shukriya adil bhai
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