Dastak hui dil pe..

by manzil-e-ishq on October 04, 2010, 10:15:51 AM
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Dastak hui dil pe, palke jhukne lagi..
saanse thumhare naam se mehkane lagi..

khamosh is dil ki dadhkane na chura.
is madhoshi se niklne me mujhey sadiya lagi..

yun har lamha mere khawabo pe apna naam na saza
meri chahat ab deewangi si badhne lagi..

karke mujhey bechain ab tu door na yun ja..
aa bas ja neendo me ki raat ab hone lagi..

jab se aaye ho zindagi me tum..
zindagi khoobsurat si lagne lagi,,
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2010, 10:18:49 AM »
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majil ji bahut khoob kaha....daad dher sari~
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2010, 10:24:00 AM »
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majil ji bahut khoob kaha....daad dher sari~

shukria abhi ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2010, 12:00:49 PM »
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Bahot khoob Manzil-e-ishq ji. Bahot khoobsurti se aapne apne jazbaat pesh kiye hain. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2010, 03:08:00 PM »
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Janab Aadaab!

Kafi achche ahsaas o khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne
Aik achchi koshish per daad kabool kijiye....

Likhate rahiye......
Aate rahiye......
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2010, 04:17:46 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Manzil ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2010, 11:00:41 AM »
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Bahot khoob Manzil-e-ishq ji. Bahot khoobsurti se aapne apne jazbaat pesh kiye hain. Daad hazir hai.
kalam pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukria riyaz ji..
aate rahiye...
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 11:02:38 AM »
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shukria parwaaz ji..
aap aaye accha laga...
aate rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 02:23:13 PM »
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Bahoot khoob likha h aapne  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2010, 07:01:14 AM »
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shukria hriday ji......
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Manzil ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2010, 07:02:03 AM »
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pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukria yasmeen ji...
aate rahiyee..
Bahoot khoob likha h aapne  Applause Applause Applause
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