Deedar

by lalit.sharma83 on March 10, 2010, 01:56:36 PM
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Tere shehar me aaye hein, Ek baar to Deedar de-de
Umar bhar ka na sahi, Tu hume chand lamhon ka hi pyaar de-de
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2010, 02:07:17 PM »
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Beautiful lines Lalit ji.bahut khoob. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2010, 02:41:23 PM »
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BAHUTKHOOB. LALIT SHARMA JI,
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Tere shehar me aaye hein, Ek baar to Deedar de-de
Umar bhar ka na sahi, Tu hume chand lamhon ka hi pyaar de-de
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 06:13:57 PM »
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acha likha hai lalit ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2010, 11:08:20 AM »
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Nice lines Lalit Ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2010, 10:21:38 PM »
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Dear friends,

I cordially thanks for all your feedbacks! I have posted one more poem of mine with lines "Manzilen bulaa rahi hain, Aa bhi jaa kahan hai tu".

I hope you all like that as well!

Brgds,
Lalit Sharma
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