^^Dekhte Dekhte Hum Kya Kar Baithe^^

by honeyrose on August 18, 2008, 05:02:37 PM
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Dekhte dekhte hum kya kar baithe
Khel khel mein hum dil kho baithe
 
Kadmo tale rukh gaye hai fizayen
Aasmaan ko dekhte hue zameen kho baithe
 
Kaise hue dillagi hum kya kar baithe
Kadam kadam pe khud ko gawa baithe
 
Dil hi dil unse muhabbat kar ne lage
Unse muhabatt karte karte hosh khone lage
 
Ek hasrath dil mein raha gaye
Unse milne ki tamana aduri raha gaye
 
Chupke chupke unko dekhte rahe
Unka likha hue paigaam dheere se padne lage
 
Tanhaye mein mulaaqaten yaad aane lage
Roshini mein doh dil milne lage
 
Halke bharish mein bheeg rahe meri choli
Muskurate mein chali unse milne chori chori
 
Hanste hanste mann se mann gungunaye
Muhabbat-e-gulzaar mein mann se mann milgaye

~*honeyrose*~
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2008, 05:39:35 PM »
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EXCELLENT WORK SO NICE,
TRULY TOUCHED THE HEART,
KEEP GOING DI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2008, 10:43:44 PM »
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Achha likha honeyrose ji....
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2008, 08:37:41 AM »
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ishaq mein tum ne so cute likha he honeyrose, very nice laga
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2008, 03:45:06 PM »
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Thank you shally sis..

Shukriya Sayyid ji...

Thank you Kanta sis..
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2008, 05:45:56 PM »
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Dekhte dekhte hum kya kar baithe
Hum unke muhabbat mein needein kho baithe
Har taraf dikhne lagi unki tasveer
Mere jismon jaan se lagi hai unki taqdeer..
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2008, 09:53:49 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on August 18, 2008, 05:02:37 PM
Dekhte dekhte hum kya kar baithe
Khel khel mein hum dil kho baithe
 
Kadmo tale rukh gaye hai fizayen
Aasmaan ko dekhte hue zameen kho baithe
 
Kaise hue dillagi hum kya kar baithe
Kadam kadam pe khud ko gawa baithe
~*honeyrose*~
Quote from: honeyrose on August 19, 2008, 05:45:56 PM
Dekhte dekhte hum kya kar baithe
Hum unke muhabbat mein needein kho baithe
Har taraf dikhne lagi unki tasveer
Mere jismon jaan se lagi hai unki taqdeer..
Jee Honey..Bahot der ho gayee aane Me.Maaf Karna
Sub Sho'ara Hazraat ne sub alfaaz keh daale..Taareef k liye koi alfaaz hi baaki nahi rakha..

Sirf Duaa eeaa Kalemaat kehta hoon ki allaah aapko " Kalum-e-Mehfooz " se Nawaaze..Wo Kalum ki Jo Kabhi Khata Kare Hi Nahi aur wo alfaaz saadir ho ki,,aap k kalaam ko padhne k liye har Shauk-e-dil betaab ho aur padh k Sairaab Ho.
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2008, 11:05:34 AM »
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Good Work Honeyrose Ji. Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2008, 02:34:07 PM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on August 20, 2008, 09:53:49 AM
Jee Honey..Bahot der ho gayee aane Me.Maaf Karna
Sub Sho'ara Hazraat ne sub alfaaz keh daale..Taareef k liye koi alfaaz hi baaki nahi rakha..

Sirf Duaa eeaa Kalemaat kehta hoon ki allaah aapko " Kalum-e-Mehfooz " se Nawaaze..Wo Kalum ki Jo Kabhi Khata Kare Hi Nahi aur wo alfaaz saadir ho ki,,aap k kalaam ko padhne k liye har Shauk-e-dil betaab ho aur padh k Sairaab Ho.


Muhammed ji bohat shukriya joh aapne aapna
waqt diya humari kalam padne mein ye mujhe
bohat khushi hue hai..  happy9

   



Quote from: Sammual on August 20, 2008, 11:05:34 AM
Good Work Honeyrose Ji. Applause

Thanks so much Sammual... happy9
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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2008, 02:40:54 PM »
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Subhan Allah,.
Bahoot Khoob Badi Behna,.
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2008, 02:44:21 PM »
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Dekha Na Samjha Ye Kya Kar Diya,.
Ek Ajnabi Ko Apna Dil De Diya,.

Apno Ka Aitbaar Na Kiya Zindagi Bhar,.
Lamho Me Ek Gair Par Jaan Nisar Kar Diya,.

Hay Ue Humne ye Kya Kar Diya,.
Ye Kya Kar Diya,.

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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2008, 02:49:15 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on August 20, 2008, 02:44:21 PM
Dekha Na Samjha Ye Kya Kar Diya,.
Ek Ajnabi Ko Apna Dil De Diya,.

Apno Ka Aitbaar Na Kiya Zindagi Bhar,.
Lamho Me Ek Gair Par Jaan Nisar Kar Diya,.

Hay Ue Humne ye Kya Kar Diya,.
Ye Kya Kar Diya,.

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Great lines Azeem bhai jaan.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP

Aur shukriya.. happy9
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2008, 05:12:43 PM »
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bahut khoob honey ji  Applause keep it up






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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2008, 07:39:20 PM »
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Achaa likha hai Honey sis.....good lines Azeem
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Thanks baadal ji..

Thanks Celmira sis...
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