Dey chukaa jigar-o-dil tujhey!

by abdbundeli on September 27, 2008, 07:11:55 PM
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Dey chukaa jigar-o-dil tujhey! Bataa, ki, ab kyaa doon?
Kyaa karoon? Kyaa na karoon? Kuchh to jataa dey mahboob!
Ye kyaa huaa hai? Na jaanaa hai, na deykhaa hai tujhey;
Aur, mein chaahtaa hoon: apnaa patah dey mahboob!!

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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 07:28:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob abd ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 09:43:12 PM »
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bekarar ji,
      Bahut-bahut shukriyaa!
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2008, 09:59:28 PM »
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 Applause Bohat khoob Abd ji..


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honeyrose ji,
 Bahut-bahut shukriyaa!
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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2008, 02:40:14 AM »
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Dey chukaa jigar-o-dil tujhey! Bataa, ki, ab kyaa doon?
Kyaa karoon? Kyaa na karoon? Kuchh to jataa dey mahboob!
Ye kyaa huaa hai? Na jaanaa hai, na deykhaa hai tujhey;
Aur, mein chaahtaa hoon: apnaa patah dey mahboob!!

                                        - abd bundeli

Bohot hi Khoob Abd Ji Applause Aapka sher, har nazm-ghazal se kuch seekhne ko hi milta hai !
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«Reply #6 on: September 28, 2008, 08:24:54 AM »
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Celmira ji,
 Aap key khushnumaa alfaaz, ye bazm, ao ye kalaam;
 Ye adabee baat-cheet, ao ye samaa  mahataabee;
 Tasawwuroun ko kahkshaaoun mein pahunchaatey hain;
 Jahaan sey door, bahut door, justjoo key liye!
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