Dil Ki Awaz

by muskan_bye on January 23, 2010, 03:13:39 PM
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hello every 1 agar aap logo ko passand aaye toh bataiyega ye nichiz kuch pesh karna chahti hai waise i am come back i am muskan.................main umeed karti hoon aapko passand aayega..........

Dil se jo awaz nikli
zindagi ko badal gayi
kuch kho si gayi thi
woh gumnam zindagi mein
na maloom tha ki koi hawa bhi jhoke ki tarha
siskati hui kahi chali jayegi
duniya mein usay mehfil mein usey
chod ke youn hawa apna rukh mod legi
dil toh adtan dharkata hai
uss hawa ke jhoke ki tarha jo
hawa leta hai lekin sirf tute patte ki tarha......
dil se jo awaz nikali yahi sada deta hai
kyu ye zindagi rote hue sada deti hai
kyu ye hawa siskate sisakte kuch kahe rahi hai...............

Dil ki awaz koi pad le toh batana
zindagi ki tarikh pad le toh koi batana.........

dil hi dil ki awaz samajh toh samjhna
magar us awaz ko tadpa tadpa ke na marna
zindagi ko yun saza deke na dabana
khushiyon ko ghum na badal dena
dil ki awaz khatam na kar dena.............

**********************************************MUSKAN************************************
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2010, 03:23:26 PM »
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nice muskan ji achha likha hai aap ne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2010, 03:30:17 PM »
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SHUKRIYA MRZAKRAM JI
AAP BHI KUCH LIKHTE TOH ACHA LAGTA ............

Humne dil se jo dil ki awaz nikali
uski sada sunai
kyoki dil ki gaherai toh dil ki awaz mein chupi hoti hai
kuch parindo ki tarha udte hue logo tak dil ki awaz ja rahi hai...

*********************************MUSKAN***************************
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2010, 03:54:55 PM »
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*SOPHI* JI AAP BHI KUCH LIKHIYE OR BATAIYE YE AAPKO KAISI LAGI DIL KI AWAZ SHAYARI KI POINT ................

*SOPHI* JI AAP AAIYE OR BATAIYE..................
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 10:09:01 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurati se likha aapne Muskan ji,great creation.welcome back to you. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause hello
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2010, 01:02:36 PM »
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Nice Muskaan JI
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2010, 02:19:00 PM »
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Awww. That is Really Good work Muskaan ji... Kya kahiye.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob..  Yhin Likhte rahiyega...

Main online nahi thi tho dekh nahi paai thi. just abhi dekha...

Main kuch likhun ? Hmmm Lemme try  !

Dil Jab jab Kuch Kehna chahta  hai
tho Ankhen Usko Byaan kar jaati hai

Palke Jhapkaake, thoda sa Sharma ke
Har Unkahi baat Chupke se keh jati hai

Yea tho Deewani hoti hai " Muskaan"
Jo bin kahe hi ehsaas jaga jati hai

Divya !
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2010, 02:21:18 PM »
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to good muskan ji.....
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riyaz106
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2010, 02:24:19 PM »
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Wonderful creation Muskaan. Very nice. Keep it up.
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2010, 03:16:29 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob Muskaan... Behad Lajawab Likha hai aapne.. Bahut dino baad aapko Padha.. Bahut accha laga aapko Yahan dekh ke. Bahut Khoooooob... Applause Applause

Divya aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Khooob Likha Hai.. Applause




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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2010, 09:32:42 PM »
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Bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne Muskaan Ji
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2010, 12:16:52 PM »
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bahut achhe  Applause Applause Applause
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ganpat gadhvi
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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2011, 04:37:50 PM »
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Hi muskan ji aap bahut acha likhti ho nice kuch parindo par likhiyega-:)
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2012, 09:49:29 PM »
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Kitabo k panne palat k sochte hai,yun palat jaye zindagi to kya bat hai,
Tamanna jo puri ho khwabo main,haqikat ban jaye to kya baat hai,
Kuch log matlab k liye dhundte hai mujhe,bin matlab koi aaye to kya baat hai,
Katal kar k to sab le jayenge dil mera,koi baaton se le jaye to kya baat hai,
Jo sharifon ki sharafat main baat na ho,ek sharabi keh jaye to kya baat hai,
Zinda rehnd tak to khushi dungi mai sabko,kisi ko meri maut pe khushi mil jaye to kya baat hai....

   .... Anju....
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2012, 02:40:29 AM »
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boht khub muskan ji and well written anju ji
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