Dil ki khwaishein

by Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:32:35 PM
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«Reply #75 on: December 24, 2008, 04:23:04 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob jawab likha hai apne mann ji!!!

behake hue ko aor na behkaao
nas nas main sama chuke ho, aor deewana na banao

khamoshi main bhi sara zahan jaan chuka humare dil ki
ab is tarah kareeb bula kar, hume na satao
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«Reply #76 on: December 24, 2008, 05:03:44 PM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya baat Hai.. Kareeb Bhi Kitne Bahane se aaye Ho aap.. hahahaha
Wah Kya Andaaz Hai... Bahut Pyaara likha hai..!!


Kareeb Aana, Phir Sharma Ke Nazren jhukana,
Yeh Andaaz-e-Nazaakat, Tumne Seekha Kahan se...

Deewane Ko Aur, Deewana Bana Jate Ho is Kadar,
Yun Kaleje Pe Churiyaa Chalana, Tumhe aaya Kahan se...
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«Reply #77 on: December 24, 2008, 05:08:28 PM »
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To janab ji sawalo per aa gaye hai.. bahoot he payara jawab likha hai apne mann ji!!  Clapping Smiley

Deewangi teri mujhe yah sab sikhla gai
chu kar aai jo tujhe hawa, wo dil tere ki baat bata gai

Ankhon teri mai, meri tasveer, tere lubo per mera naam
tere bin kahe he , tera sara haal samjha gai
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«Reply #78 on: December 24, 2008, 05:17:07 PM »
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Hmm.. Sawal to ab Karna hi padega na.. is kadar Tadpati jo hain aap.. Hahaha ek aur sawal lijiye..
Aur Masa-allah.. Yeh Jawab to aapne bahut Hi Pyar Bhara likha Hai.. Bahut khoooob..!!


Samajh Gaye Hum, Tera Ishaara E-Sanam,
Ke tu Ishq Humen Be-intehaan karti Hai...

Lab pe Mera Naam, Aankhon me Tasveer Liye,
Tu Shay Me Mujhe Hi Talaasha Karti Hai...

Par Phir Bhi Kyun Tu, Mujhe Tarsaya karti Hai,
Paas Ho Kar Bhi, Berukhi Dikhaya karti hai...!!
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«Reply #79 on: December 24, 2008, 05:36:09 PM »
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dono bahut acche likh rahe hai... ab mere dil ki yehi
khwaish hai ke aap dono yu hi jawab pe jawab dete rehna
aur mehful sajate rehna ISHQ section mein... love9
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«Reply #80 on: December 24, 2008, 05:53:08 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on December 24, 2008, 05:17:07 PM
Hmm.. Sawal to ab Karna hi padega na.. is kadar Tadpati jo hain aap.. Hahaha ek aur sawal lijiye..
Aur Masa-allah.. Yeh Jawab to aapne bahut Hi Pyar Bhara likha Hai.. Bahut khoooob..!!


Samajh Gaye Hum, Tera Ishaara E-Sanam,
Ke tu Ishq Humen Be-intehaan karti Hai...

Lab pe Mera Naam, Aankhon me Tasveer Liye,
Tu Shay Me Mujhe Hi Talaasha Karti Hai...

Par Phir Bhi Kyun Tu, Mujhe Tarsaya karti Hai,
Paas Ho Kar Bhi, Berukhi Dikhaya karti hai...!!

Phir se sawal... magar bahoot he payara likha hai mann ji...

Deewane ho app, apki deewangi se darte hai
hosh kaha apko, kab, kaha, kaya app karte hai  DOH

apke issi deewanepan per, magar hum marte hai
dekh dekh kar tasveer teri, aaine main hum sawarte hai

na karo sawl wo, jin ke jawab main nigah jhuk jaaye
berukhi ke pardein main, na jaane kitne armaan muchlte hai
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«Reply #81 on: December 24, 2008, 06:35:29 PM »
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bahut khoob Pooja ji aur mann ji-khumaar se sugandhit ho gaya hai poora maahol yahan...laajawab.
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«Reply #82 on: December 24, 2008, 06:46:35 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 24, 2008, 06:35:29 PM
bahut khoob Pooja ji aur mann ji-khumaar se sugandhit ho gaya hai poora maahol yahan...laajawab.

Sirf comments...  Shocked Even More  Hum to kab se apke jawab ka intzaar kar rahe hai Prateek ji!!!:doh:
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«Reply #83 on: December 24, 2008, 06:53:54 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 08:46:55 PM
waah pooja ji waah..bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan janm di he aapney.umda.

In bimaariyon ka ilaaj hi agar ikraar hai
to saaf sunlo,mujhko tumse pyaar hai!
teri takdeer ko pur kaise meri hatheli du main
jaanta hu haasil nahi mujhey kabhi bahaar hai!!

tum kyon sawaalon se joojhtey ho
samandar mein saahil khojtey ho?
doobney ko hum to kub se tayaar hai
bolo aisa saath tumko sweekar hai!!


Prateek ji, apki is kavita ka 3rd time jawab likh rahi hu... apse kuch parr pane ki chah mai:

Main hu chanchala,
urdati hawa main beh jaati hu
App rahna chaho jameen per
apke issi sawbhav per mar jaati hu
ho lakh baatein dil main
phir bhi na lub per kuch late ho
aor mera to yah haal hai
ek he baat, baar baar kahe jaati hu
na hi sahil, na he jhunjhalana, ek sawal bas
kaya aise main bhi, main sweekar hu
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«Reply #84 on: December 25, 2008, 06:19:30 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 24, 2008, 06:35:29 PM
bahut khoob Pooja ji aur mann ji-khumaar se sugandhit ho gaya hai poora maahol yahan...laajawab.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Prateek Ji..!! Yunhi Hausla Afzaai Karte Rahiyega..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #85 on: December 25, 2008, 06:35:50 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 24, 2008, 05:53:08 PM
Phir se sawal... magar bahoot he payara likha hai mann ji...

Deewane ho app, apki deewangi se darte hai
hosh kaha apko, kab, kaha, kaya app karte hai  DOH

apke issi deewanepan per, magar hum marte hai
dekh dekh kar tasveer teri, aaine main hum sawarte hai

na karo sawl wo, jin ke jawab main nigah jhuk jaaye
berukhi ke pardein main, na jaane kitne armaan muchlte hai


Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Yeh Jawab to aapka Humara Dil hi Loot ke Le gaya..
Bahut Hi Pyaar Bhara Jawab diya Hai aapne..!! Har Lafz Bahut Pyaara Hai.. Applause Applause


Mar Mitne Ki Tamanna Hai Sanam, Tere Har Ek Andaaz Par,
Hosh Kho Dene ki Khwaish Hai, Tere Labon Ki Mithaas Par...

Mana Ki Tasveer Meri, Apne Dil se Lagaaye Rakhti Ho,
Par Humen to Qatl Hona hai, Tujhe choone Ke Ehasaas Par...

Kaash..!! Ek Baar Tu Kahati, Ki Bhar Lo Mujhe Baahon Me,
Dil Apna Fanaa Tak Kar Jate Hum, Tere is Ek Izhaar Par....
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«Reply #86 on: December 25, 2008, 08:31:47 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 24, 2008, 06:53:54 PM
Prateek ji, apki is kavita ka 3rd time jawab likh rahi hu... apse kuch parr pane ki chah mai:

Main hu chanchala,
urdati hawa main beh jaati hu
App rahna chaho jameen per
apke issi sawbhav per mar jaati hu
ho lakh baatein dil main
phir bhi na lub per kuch late ho
aor mera to yah haal hai
ek he baat, baar baar kahe jaati hu
na hi sahil, na he jhunjhalana, ek sawal bas
kaya aise main bhi, main sweekar hu


Pooja ji,filhaal meri request hain yeh panne behad khoobsurat bun gaye hein...aapki aur Mann ji ki shaayri se..inhe jaari rakhiye...aur sama mehkane dijiye...khumaar ka..is kavita ka jawaab yahan pat uchit nahi lagega.Padhne ka lutff aa raha hein filhaal to....wahi lene dijiye....
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«Reply #87 on: December 25, 2008, 09:35:32 AM »
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Bahut khoob.. Pooja di, Prateek Ji, Diya, Shihab Ji aur Mann.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #88 on: December 25, 2008, 09:38:57 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 25, 2008, 08:31:47 AM
Pooja ji,filhaal meri request hain yeh panne behad khoobsurat bun gaye hein...aapki aur Mann ji ki shaayri se..inhe jaari rakhiye...aur sama mehkane dijiye...khumaar ka..is kavita ka jawaab yahan pat uchit nahi lagega.Padhne ka lutff aa raha hein filhaal to....wahi lene dijiye....

Prateek Ji.. Aapne kyon fullstop laga diya..
Aap sirf padhne ka lutff lete ajeeb se lagte hai..  Usual Smile Likhte bhi rahiye..  Usual Smile
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«Reply #89 on: December 25, 2008, 10:44:24 AM »
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yes, i too am enjoying the writings. Thats the reason, not interfering with my scribblings in between. Please continue.

Jasbir Singh
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