-----/// Dil yeh bahal jaaye ///----- Hriday

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kabhi    yeh    fisal    jaaye
kabhi   to    sambhal jaaye

dekh   teri    hasi   ko  bas
dil    apnaa    bahal   jaaye

bheege   hothon  ko dekh
dil   apnaa   machal  jaaye

leke  tujhe   baahon  mein
jism    yeh    pighal   jaaye

doob   teri   aankhon mein
raat     yeh     nikal   jaaye

shamaa ki mohabbat mein
parwaanaa       jal     jaaye

baithi    rahe   saamne  tu
ban haseen   ghazal jaaye

ho    thodi    baarish ,   fir
mausam  bhi  badal  jaaye


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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2013, 02:18:49 PM »
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Bahut kam shabdon mein bahut saara sandesh....
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2013, 06:10:50 PM »
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tere labon ko jo mera naam chhu jaye
geet naya fir koi nai gazal ban jaye


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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2013, 08:31:21 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. bahut kam words mein bahut kuch kah gaye aap hriday ji...mujhe aapka yeh andaaz bhi bahut pasand aaya.. dil se daaaaaaaaaad deti hoon qubool kijiyega..
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bahut khoob..bahut khoob hriday jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2013, 03:51:54 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Iqtedar ji....!!!

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thank you sooo much Jyuthika ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Kittoo ji....!!!

Bahut kam shabdon mein bahut saara sandesh....
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2013, 03:58:11 AM »
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thankk youu sooo much hai ji...!!! Usual Smile

baste ho meri dhadkano mein, tum mere ehsaas ban ke
zindagi meri tumse hai, base ho mujhme saans ban ke


tere labon ko jo mera naam chhu jaye
geet naya fir koi nai gazal ban jaye


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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji...!!!

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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. bahut kam words mein bahut kuch kah gaye aap hriday ji...mujhe aapka yeh andaaz bhi bahut pasand aaya.. dil se daaaaaaaaaad deti hoon qubool kijiyega..
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ashwani ji....!!!

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bahut khoob..bahut khoob hriday jee..dhero daad..happy9
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