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by ~Aatish~ on February 28, 2012, 05:45:27 AM
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Jara samjha karo dilber
mohobbat DIL se hoti hai.
Tume kese mai samjau
badi muskil se hoti hai.
Raag hai naya naya aur tum
gungunane ki baat karti ho.

badi muskil se samla hu
thodi door chalne do.
hoge kamyaab hum bi
thoda baqt badalne do.
tirgi hai zindagi aur tum
ghar sajane ki baat karti ho.

khamosi meri muzko
dasti hai har lamha.
muflisi meri muzpe
hasti hai har lamha.
dil hai jala jala aur tum
dil jalane ki baat karti ho
 
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2012, 05:50:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob Aatish Ji
dil jalane ki baat karti ho... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2012, 05:54:57 AM »
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thank u ji.
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2012, 06:23:15 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2012, 06:29:37 AM »
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thank u ji.
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2012, 06:37:52 AM »
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zara samjha karo dilber
mohobbat DIL se hoti hai.
Tume kese mai samjau
badi muskil se hoti hai.
Raag hai naya naya aur tum
gungunane ki baat karti ho.

badi mushkil se sambhla hu
thodi door chalne do.
hoge kamyaab hum bi
thoda waqt badalne do.
tirgi hai zindagi aur tum
ghar sajane ki baat karti ho.

khamoshi meri mujhko
dasti hai har lamha.
muflisi meri mujhpe
hasta hai har lamha.
dil hai jala jala aur tum
dil jalane ki baat karti ho
 

waaaaaaaaaaaaaah janab zara lafzo.n ko sahi se likha karein.
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2012, 06:58:04 AM »
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thank u ji thank u.  icon_salut
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2012, 02:10:45 PM »
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Kya baat hai Aatish ji.. Very Interesting and Beautiful creation !!!
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2012, 02:15:37 PM »
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boht khoob atish ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2012, 06:04:59 PM »
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wah wah wah wah....bahut khoob!subhan allah:)pathaake ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2012, 06:18:58 AM »
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thank u nysha ji.
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2012, 06:20:10 AM »
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thank u sahil ji.
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2012, 06:21:28 AM »
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thank u maasi thank u ji Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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