<>*Do mehke mehke se jism*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 07, 2010, 05:30:04 PM
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Do mehke mehke se jism jab ek chaadar me so rahe the

Labon ki dabi dabi hasi me saansein ulajh gai thi

Sukhe hue kinaaron pe tab kahin duurr

Thanda  saawan baras raha tha

Chaand bhi chupke se ye dekh sharma gaya tha

Hawaein bhi shaakhon se athkheliyan kar rahi thi

Badan ek anjaane dard se chhuuur ho raha tha

Saara jahaan so raha tha bas do ruuhein jag rahi thi

Do ruuhein do na rehke ek ho gai thi jab

Bata uss waqt main kahan thi???
Bata uss waqt tu kahan tha???

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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2010, 06:32:42 PM »
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Oye hoye.. Anamika Ji Khumaar Chhaa gaya Padh ke.. har ek Lafz, har ek khayal Mohabbat me bheega Hai.. Kya Kahun.. Taareef Ke liye Lafz Kam padh gaye Hain..!!! Bahut Khoooooooob..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2010, 07:00:58 PM »
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wah wah kasak ji. jitne bebaak aur rindaana alfaaz hain, utne hi naazuk aur khoobsurat khayaal hain.

makhdoom ki mash-hoor nazm ki yaad taaza ho gayee ....

ik chameli ke mandve tale
maikade se zara door us mod par
do badan pyaar ki aag mein jal gaye

bauhaut khoob !
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2010, 07:10:01 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2010, 07:51:10 PM »
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Oye hoye.. Anamika Ji Khumaar Chhaa gaya Padh ke.. har ek Lafz, har ek khayal Mohabbat me bheega Hai.. Kya Kahun.. Taareef Ke liye Lafz Kam padh gaye Hain..!!! Bahut Khoooooooob..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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shukriya mann ji .itni tareef k liye..lekin khumar e ishq aur aap yunhi chale jayen ye kuch maza nahin aaya...... atleast ek sher to banta hai tareef k liye aapki taraf se....   hai naaa???
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2010, 07:51:51 PM »
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wah wah kasak ji. jitne bebaak aur rindaana alfaaz hain, utne hi naazuk aur khoobsurat khayaal hain.

makhdoom ki mash-hoor nazm ki yaad taaza ho gayee ....

ik chameli ke mandve tale
maikade se zara door us mod par
do badan pyaar ki aag mein jal gaye

bauhaut khoob !

shukriyaa zarra ji aapne itne dil se ise padha aur saraha... bht bht shukriya ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2010, 07:52:38 PM »
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thnx thk for appreciating
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2010, 08:22:43 PM »
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Haaye!!!! itna Khumar Anuji!!!!!

Har Lafz Ishq Ki madhoshi Mein Dooba Hua..Bahuttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan!!!

Mujhe Khaas Taur pe Aakhri Jumle Par Woh Aapka Sawaal puchna behadddd Pasand Aaya..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Anuji

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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2010, 08:30:14 PM »
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OH....kya kahu.....you are the queen of Khumaar...... icon_queen icon_queen icon_queen icon_queen
Sach itna katilaana shabdon ka vaar mat karo.....koi mar jaayega bechara.....imagine karte karte...... Winking Winking Winking Winking

Do behke behke se ishq k beemaar,angaron se tap rahe they unke badan
Kho gaye they ek dusre mai ess kadar ke kaun hain wo naa thee khabar

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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2010, 08:41:38 PM »
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naa thi khabar k kaun tu tha kaun main thi
jo bacha tha dono me wo bas masti ki lehar thi


thnx guddu itni tareef k liye.....mmuuaahhh

OH....kya kahu.....you are the queen of Khumaar...... icon_queen icon_queen icon_queen icon_queen
Sach itna katilaana shabdon ka vaar mat karo.....koi mar jaayega bechara.....imagine karte karte...... Winking Winking Winking Winking

Do behke behke se ishq k beemaar,angaron se tap rahe they unke badan
Kho gaye they ek dusre mai ess kadar ke kaun hain wo naa thee khabar


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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2010, 08:43:27 PM »
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Haaye!!!! itna Khumar Anuji!!!!!

Har Lafz Ishq Ki madhoshi Mein Dooba Hua..Bahuttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan!!!

Mujhe Khaas Taur pe Aakhri Jumle Par Woh Aapka Sawaal puchna behadddd Pasand Aaya..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Anuji

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnx khwaish jiiiiiii thnx a lotttt....aap sabne pasand ki aur khumaar k nashe me aaye ..to mehnat wasool......
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2010, 02:56:09 AM »
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Anamika di,
bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2010, 09:28:58 AM »
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Anamika di,
bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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thnx rahim
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2010, 10:24:43 AM »
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WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI          KASAK... DIL KI JI.....


"DO MEHKE MEHKE SE JISM" EK CHAADAR ME SO RAHE THE
DHEERE DHEERE DO JISM EK JAAN HO RAHE THE

HOLE HOLE SE NAZDIKIYAN BADH RAHI THI
DIL MACHAL RAHE THE TAN MAN ME AAG LAG RAHI THI

PYAAR KI AANDHIYAN CHAL RAHI THI DO JISM SAMBHAL NAHI PAA RAHE THE
BHULA KE DUNIYA KO EK DUJHE ME KHO RAHE THE

"DO MEHEKE MEHEKE SE JISM" EK CHAADAR ME SO RAHE THE............
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2010, 08:22:49 PM »
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wowwwwww kasak ji kya romatic question he apka........

as usal it can be written only by kasak......

wese chupke se ek baat kahni he apse.....poetry to apki behtareen hoti hi he but isme muje pic bht jayda pasand ayi......

deep thoughts.......

well wese ek baat kahu apke sawal ke jawab me ......

wo jo 2 jism the na unme se ek me hi tha ........ab "dobara mat puchna" ki bata tu kaha tha ha ha ha ha
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