*Ehsaan*

by Roja on September 23, 2007, 11:59:11 PM
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Dedicated to You ... Yaara

Dil ka makaan ye mere aaker tumne savara
Kaise adha karungi ehsaan main yeh tumhara?

Tanha thi zindagi ye, Tanha safer tha meri
Ki tum-ne meherbaani de-ker mujhe sahara

Her ore mushkile thi, her ore tha andhera
Tum ban-ke aaye ho sanam Takdeer ka sitara

Us waqt aake tum-ne thaami hai bhahein meri
Her shaks ker gaya tha jab mujh ko be-sahara

Agar zindagi rahee tho kabhi aajma ke dekhna
ROJA pe karz hoga ehsaan ye tumhara.....
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2007, 12:10:22 AM »
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Wah ! kya baat hai :D

Bahut khoob =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2007, 10:23:48 AM »
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Very Nice Roja... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2007, 03:03:53 PM »
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WOW...seedhe saadhe shabdon me acchi baat kahi Roja.....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2007, 11:30:16 PM »
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That is nice one Roja!
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2007, 03:03:04 PM »
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I liked it !! tongue3
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2007, 11:58:02 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Roja, keep it up!
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2007, 07:55:14 PM »
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Bohat khoob Roja...
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2007, 02:32:26 PM »
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Bahut khub Roja..
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2007, 11:30:38 AM »
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Thank you very much

Raj ji, Shikha ji, Gavrav ji, Mr Ricky,  Ravi_dave ji, Aryaan ji, and
sweet Paani... Keep coming.

Tosha ji... kya hua???  :wink:
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2007, 12:16:08 PM »
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]Haskar sada sehti hu mai hota rahe jo bhi sitam

Ehsaas ab mujh ko kahan kya hai khushi ya koyee gam?
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2007, 11:19:08 PM »
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Dedicated to You ... Yaara

Dil ka makaan ye mere aaker tumne savara
Kaise adha karungi ehsaan main yeh tumhara?

Tanha thi zindagi ye, Tanha safer tha meri
Ki tum-ne meherbaani de-ker mujhe sahara

Her ore mushkile thi, her ore tha andhera
Tum ban-ke aaye ho sanam Takdeer ka sitara

Us waqt aake tum-ne thaami hai bhahein meri
Her shaks ker gaya tha jab mujh ko be-sahara

Agar zindagi rahee tho kabhi aajma ke dekhna
ROJA pe karz hoga ehsaan ye tumhara.....
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Oye Hoye.!! KYa Baat hai ROJA.. ! Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe Hain aapne.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
Kamaal kar diya.. Ehasaan lafz ki Paribhasha samjha di aapne hum sab ko....!! tongue3 tongue3

Great work

Vicky
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2007, 07:48:43 PM »
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Quote from: "Roja"
Dedicated to You ... Yaara

Dil ka makaan ye mere aaker tumne savara
Kaise adha karungi ehsaan main yeh tumhara?

Tanha thi zindagi ye, Tanha safer tha meri
Ki tum-ne meherbaani de-ker mujhe sahara

Her ore mushkile thi, her ore tha andhera
Tum ban-ke aaye ho sanam Takdeer ka sitara

Us waqt aake tum-ne thaami hai bhahein meri
Her shaks ker gaya tha jab mujh ko be-sahara

Agar zindagi rahee tho kabhi aajma ke dekhna
ROJA pe karz hoga ehsaan ye tumhara.....
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Oye Hoye.!! KYa Baat hai ROJA.. ! Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe Hain aapne.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
Kamaal kar diya.. Ehasaan lafz ki Paribhasha samjha di aapne hum sab ko....!! tongue3 tongue3

Great work

Vicky


Thank you very much aapko yeh kalam pasand aaya. :D
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2007, 11:06:20 PM »
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Chaand Ko Bin Chaandni Ke Kyun Tarsa Rahi Ho,
Khud Chaandni Ho Shayad Isliye Itraa Rahi Ho.....

Yeh Jaan ke Bhi Ki Bin Chaandni Adhura Hai Chaand,
Shayad Chaand Ko Yeh "EHSAAN" Jata Rahi Ho......!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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