EHSAAS

by justtauseef on August 15, 2011, 10:48:23 AM
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Andhero mein ujalo ki tarah
baadalon mein Chand ki tarah
phoolon mein ek gulab ki tarah
khizan mein ek bahaar ki tarah!

sardi mein garm ehsas jaisa
bebasi mein ek sahare jaisa
barish ki pahli boond jaisa
khushi mein dil ki parwaz jaisa!

Pahadon se girta aabshar ho jaise
baghon mein lauti ho bahaar jaise
Chehra na dekha, hansi to Jee li humne
Marubhumi mein ho Sabza-zar jaise!

Self written on request of a friend.
Tauseef
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2011, 06:03:43 PM »
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V. good, Tauseef ji...

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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2011, 07:01:10 PM »
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bahut hi khub Tauseef sahab--
khayalon ke ehsaas bht khub rahe--
daad baht baht daad Usual Smile

hanste rahiye
tata  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2011, 08:01:46 PM »
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Tauseef Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab bade khoob ahsaas O khayaaal hai daad Usual Smile
Sabhi ahsaas bahut achche se sajaaye hai Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye .. Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Haan shayad aap last line meiN MatraBhumi " likhana
chahate the... Kuch spel mistake hua hai durust kar
lijiye.. Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2011, 06:10:03 AM »
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Dear Perwaaz saab aadab!
Thanks for appreciation....
I have written marubhumi(desert) since
feelings are in contrast...thats why
 I penned in the same line Sabza-zar(oasis).
I hope I made my point clear.

Regards

Tauseef
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