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by HumTum is back on December 15, 2006, 04:13:53 PM
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Ishq sada se khubsurat hai..aye ishq teri har dil ko zarurat hai..ye khawab suhana har dil ne dekha...har dil ko tabir ki hasrat hai...shab o roz mien kahaan samaaye tu..tu har dil ki lamha lamha zarurat hai..ek tere hi dam se ye duniya khubsurat hai...




Tere lims ki khusbu ne mehkaya hai badan mera
Nafas nafas pe likha hai meine naam, sanam tera

Bistar ki silvatooN ko dekh ke hota hai yeh gumaN
Rha hai meri chahtooN pe har lamha, karam tera

Safar zindgi ka aur khushnumaaN ho jata hai tab
Milta hai jab mere kadmoN se aakar, kadam tera

Kis trah pehru tujhey khyaal yeh rehta hai mujhey
Tere hi sadke hua hai jaseey yeh, janam mera

Ishq ki intehaa bhalaa aur bhi kya hogi janemaaN
Tere dekhe se hi aata hai dum mein dum mera

Tere noor se hi hota hai ujala zindgi mein meri
Teri adyooN pe qurbaan hai yeh “HumTum” tera!!

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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2006, 05:43:59 PM »
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Shukriya Majid ....

han kucch batien btayi nhi jati ..... yeh afsana to nigahooN se bayaaN hota hai ...... tumko kucch kehne ki zaruurat nhi ... zahir hai tera haal unse kahe bagair ...


mehboob tere dum se chalti hai zindgi
Tu ishq hai mera tu hi hai meri bandgi
nahin hai ab hosh humey zamane ka
haan tere rang mein yeh zindgi rangdi !!
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2006, 10:51:40 PM »
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Wahh humtum n Majid,gr8 work guys.
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2006, 10:58:38 PM »
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Nice ones HT and Majid !!
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2006, 09:54:15 AM »
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Good job HumTum and Majid..
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2006, 10:39:10 AM »
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Good Ones HumTum & Majid...
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2006, 02:07:26 PM »
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Wah HUM TUM Jeeeeeeeeeeeee ...............!!!
bahoot hi khubsurat Ahasaas hai....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2006, 02:09:51 PM »
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good to see you chitra.... kuch ho jaaye  apse bhi Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2006, 04:33:53 PM »
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Nidhi ji

Bhaut bahut Shukriya !!

Aryaan


Thanks a Million !!

Talat

Shukriya Dr Sahiba .. aap ne kucch nhi likha !!

Pooja Ji

Bahut - -2 Shukriya !!

Chirta (Anti) Ji

Baad Mud'dat ke woh aaye hai nazar mehfil mein
Khuda khiar ho woh chale gaye kucch likhe bagair!!

Majid

Thanks & Nice one!!


Gazal tere husn pe likh to du Magar
Milte nhi alfaaz husn-e-byaa.N ke liye
Yha baharooN ka kya kaam ke jab ke
Phool ik hi kaafi hai baagbaa.N ke liye !!
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2006, 04:36:44 PM »
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accha likha hai ... Mr. !!
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2006, 05:00:35 PM »
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Shukriya Miss!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2006, 11:01:55 PM »
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Very nice again majid n ur siggi is really very very nice.
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2006, 02:37:08 PM »
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Nice Majid !!

Teri ankhoo.N mein mujhey janaat nazar aati hai
Mehkne lage ghar jab tere aane ki kabar aati hai
Yeh shoki yeh nazaakat yeh khul ke muskurana
Tu kya jane teri har adda humpe qahar dhati hai !!

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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2006, 12:25:14 AM »
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Ishq sada se khubsurat hai..aye ishq teri har dil ko zarurat hai..ye khawab suhana har dil ne dekha...har dil ko tabir ki hasrat hai...shab o roz mien kahaan samaaye tu..tu har dil ki lamha lamha zarurat hai..ek tere hi dam se ye duniya khubsurat hai...




Tere lims ki khusbu ne mehkaya hai badan mera
Nafas nafas pe likha hai meine naam, sanam tera

Bistar ki silvatooN ko dekh ke hota hai yeh gumaN
Rha hai meri chahtooN pe har lamha, karam tera

Safar zindgi ka aur khushnumaaN ho jata hai tab
Milta hai jab mere kadmoN se aakar, kadam tera

Kis trah pehru tujhey khyaal yeh rehta hai mujhey
Tere hi sadke hua hai jaseey yeh, janam mera

Ishq ki intehaa bhalaa aur bhi kya hogi janemaaN
Tere dekhe se hi aata hai dum mein dum mera

Tere noor se hi hota hai ujala zindgi mein meri
Teri adyooN pe qurbaan hai yeh “HumTum” tera!!

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Mujhe  hairat hue aap ka  fazal  padh kar
quinki nazm aur gazal to kah nahin sakte un ke kuch usool hain kahin kuch hudood hain taba aazmaie karna acha hai. magar tukbandi bhi
lai aur sur mai huti hai. Maine yeh sirf isliye likah hai ke aap kuch samajhne ki koshish karte hain. Agar alfaz se khelne ke bajai unko tarteeb se bithain aur wazan ka khayal rakain to mumkin hai aik do qadam ki musafat tai hu sake warna loog milte gaye aur qafila banta gaya
lims to kucha hai hi nahin lams hai
lams mahsoos huta sungha nahin jata hai waise aap kuch bhi kar sakte hain jab aap ne khushbu aur mahak ka zikr kiaya hai to nafs nafs kahan fit hu ga to gul bute ,kalyan , shakh etc etc
isi tarah har shiar ko padhain
Aap isko dilse nalaga lain humne aik thread islah ki shuru ki thee woh yaad bash huye
zara talash gumshudha ho
ws javed
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2006, 03:04:11 PM »
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Adaab ! Javed sahab,

yaqiin jani'ye aap ki post parh kar bahut khushi huwii. aap ne jo sujhaaw diye haiN, sabhi durust haiN...kyoN na hoN, aap ustaad haiN!

Pehle sh'er mein meiney lams hi likhna tha woh typo ho gya.... Gustakhi mua'af Usual Smile.

aap ka shu'ru kiya huwwa thread nazar hu'wa ...... iske liye mein te'h dil se aapka shukargu'zar hoon.. yaqi'inan mein uss se Sh'ayri ka ilam hasiil karunga !!

Aap se ik aur guz'arish hai Javed sahaab, ke yun hi meri likhe asha'arooN ko nawazate rahi'yega aur un mein jo bhi khamiyaa ho btate rahi'yega Usual Smile

Shukriyah:)

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