Ek Ehesaas

by Meena on May 23, 2005, 03:51:56 PM
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Yuh to bohot kuch likha ja sakhta hai pyar ke bare me, apni taraf se ek choti si koshish.... :D

Yeh ehesas hai kaunsa, jo hume bar bar tadpata hai,
Jane kyu hurdum tera hi khayal ata hai,

Chand ko dekhti hoon, jab bhi teri baate sochti hoon,
Teri mujshe yuh dilagi karna, chehre pe muskurahat lata hai,

Intezaar rehta hai besabri se, ke kab tumse mulakat ho,
Par jab samne hote ho tum, to dil thoda sa gabrata hai,

Chahati hoon mai, ke yuhi hum ek doosre se baate karte rahe,
Yeh dil bhi mera na, bade ajeeb se sapne aab sajata hai,

Mehefil me baithi hoon, dosto ki bheed hai,
Tanhai samajh kar yeh dil tujh ko hi kyu bulata hai,

Yeh kya hogaya hai mujhe, yeh kaisi bekarari hai,
Kya yeh mitha ehesas hi pyar kehelata hai?
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2005, 04:00:08 PM »
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Ab kya khey iss ke barey mein Mohtrama. apney to jassey alfazzo mein jaan hi dal di ho. bahoot hi khoob likha hai ... ab iski tareef bhi kya kru .... lafz nhi hai mere paas gar hotey to tareef pe hi ik gazal likh deta ... kash mein ik shayar hota .... pyaar ke eahsaas ko apney jis andaz mein bataya hai ... wakie mein kabil-e-tariif hai .... yeh tram mein likha tha ya ghar pa baith ke .... khair ... apkey jaissa acha to nhi likh paunga lekin ik khoshish mein bhi ker ke dekhta hoon ... umeed hai aap sab ko bahut bore karunga ... jawab ka muntzir !!

mere dil pe aakar tum chhaa gaye ho
tanhaa tha mai aur tum aa gaye ho
mujhe khud se hi milwaa rahe ho
wo sach lagtaa hai, jo dil ne kahaa hai
haan tum wahi ho jise dil dhoondhtaa hai

ummeedon ko bas sahar mil gayee hai
murjhaayee si ek kali khil gayee hai
khushiyaan jo paayee hai bilkul nayee hain
pal bhar mein ghum saare dil bhooltaa hai
haan tum wahi ho jise dil dhoondhtaa hai

aie kaash yeh pal guzarne na paayein
yeh mehak yeh khushboo bikharne na paayein
yeh pal hai sadiyon mein humne paayein
ek khwaab sach banke jaag uthhaa hai
haan tum wahi ho jise dil dhoondhtaa hai

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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2005, 04:03:25 PM »
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lol shukriya humtum ji!!!!  :D  apne bih to kitna acha likha hai...so sweet!!!!!!  :D

haath utha kar Khuda se duayen manga karte te khushion ki,
tume bej kar Khuda ne jaise mere pas jaanat hi bej di!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2005, 04:05:08 PM »
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wah ... bahoot khoob !!!

khwaabon ke mausam leke koi jo mila hai
aie kaash thamne na paaye jo yeh silsilaa hai
raushni si ho gayee, toote bujhe chiraagon mein
meri simt koi shayad do kadam chalaa hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2005, 04:08:14 PM »
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wah ji wah!!!!!!! brillient!!!

tere saath guzara waqt khaid kar leti hono apne dil me,
sahara banta hai yeh jab judai ke mare dil hota hai mushkil me!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2005, 04:10:01 PM »
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sach mein ? ... bahoot khoob !!

is imtahaan se guzarne ki aarzoo hai
bas izhaar karne ki aarzoo hai
anjaam haan yaa na hi to hogaa
to ab jeene yaa marne ki aarzoo hai

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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2005, 04:13:49 PM »
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lol nahin jhoot me  :D  btw apke liye nahin likh rahi jo tina kush ho rahe ho  :evil:


izhar-e-ishq un fizaon se poch,
jo mere mohabbat ka paigam tere pas aa rahe hai!!  :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2005, 04:14:23 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm...........  bahot  khoob  meena......nice  wordings........execllent  reply  hum  tum.........good going................
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2005, 04:15:04 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm...........  bahot  khoob  meena......nice  wordings........execllent  reply  hum  tum.........good going................


shukriya waheed bidu!!!  :D
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2005, 04:15:38 PM »
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haye Meena ji kya adaiyen hai app ki ... gussa mat kijiyega hum to bus yuhi dillagi ker rhey hai :wink:

kuchh ummeedein, kuchh sapne aur kuchh armaan hain
pyar ne mujhe chhoo liyaa hai kuchh aisa gumaan hain

kahiye janab kya boltey ho !!
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2005, 04:18:13 PM »
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wah ji wah....

pyar ki baazi to bich chuki hai,
haar jeet ka faisla abhi baki hai!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2005, 04:25:18 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm...........  bahot  khoob  meena......nice  wordings........execllent  reply  hum  tum.........good going................


shukriya waheed bidu!!!  :D


hmmmmmmmm   ur  welcome  meena..............  motiiiiiiii..........gd......
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«Reply #12 on: May 23, 2005, 05:07:18 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm...........  bahot  khoob  meena......nice  wordings........execllent  reply  hum  tum.........good going................


shukriya waheed bidu!!!  :D


hmmmmmmmm   ur  welcome  meena..............  motiiiiiiii..........gd......


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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2005, 05:23:54 PM »
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Yuh to bohot kuch likha ja sakhta hai pyar ke bare me, apni taraf se ek choti si koshish.... :D

Yeh ehesas hai kaunsa, jo hume bar bar tadpata hai,
Jane kyu hurdum tera hi khayal ata hai,

Chand ko dekhti hoon, jab bhi teri baate sochti hoon,
Teri mujshe yuh dilagi karna, chehre pe muskurahat lata hai,

Intezaar rehta hai besabri se, ke kab tumse mulakat ho,
Par jab samne hote ho tum, to dil thoda sa gabrata hai,

Chahati hoon mai, ke yuhi hum ek doosre se baate karte rahe,
Yeh dil bhi mera na, bade ajeeb se sapne aab sajata hai,

Mehefil me baithi hoon, dosto ki bheed hai,
Tanhai samajh kar yeh dil tujh ko hi kyu bulata hai,

Yeh kya hogaya hai mujhe, yeh kaisi bekarari hai,
Kya yeh mitha ehesas hi pyar kehelata hai?


wah meena sis,excellent,ek ek line dil ko chhui,such beautiful words,very very very very nice:)

excellent humtum and all.
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2005, 05:25:35 PM »
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oyeeeeeeeeeeeee thanx nidhi!!!!! :D  meri psot pe fatafat reply dene jo aa jati ho  :D
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