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by deetri1 on May 21, 2008, 01:52:00 AM
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ya to sukoon ka thikana chhodo...
ya uski yaado ab aana  chhodo....

ya khushboo bano tum
ya hawa ban jaao....
magar mera ashiyana chhodo...

ya na jaao tum
ya phir na aana...
baharo mujhe satana chhodo...

ya tumhe shauk hai
ya mein hi khilona hoon...
mujhe todna..banaana chhodo...

ya mein jalta hoon
ya tamanna jalti hai...
kuchh to khatir e parwana chhodo...

ya chhodo ye badmasti
ya chhodo ya deewanapan...
ya phir aaj ye maikhana chhodo...

ya to sukoon ka thikana chhodo
ya uski yaado ab aana chhodo....!

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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2008, 01:55:02 AM »
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Bohot khoob Deetri Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2008, 03:33:11 AM »
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aapko pudh kur kabhi waah to kabhi aah nikalta he.kamaal he.
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2008, 11:18:56 AM »
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just amazing dear keep up
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2008, 12:17:22 PM »
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welcome to yoindia Deetri
bahut accha likha hai aapne
keep it up

ya to khwabon mein aana chodo
ya phir meri haeeqat se mil jao


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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2008, 11:44:30 PM »
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ya to sukoon ka thikana chhodo...
ya uski yaado ab aana  chhodo....

ya khushboo bano tum
ya hawa ban jaao....
magar mera ashiyana chhodo...

ya na jaao tum
ya phir na aana...
baharo mujhe satana chhodo...

ya tumhe shauk hai
ya mein hi khilona hoon...
mujhe todna..banaana chhodo...

ya mein jalta hoon
ya tamanna jalti hai...
kuchh to khatir e parwana chhodo...

ya chhodo ye badmasti
ya chhodo ya deewanapan...
ya phir aaj ye maikhana chhodo...

ya to sukoon ka thikana chhodo
ya uski yaado ab aana chhodo....!




is tarranum se gaana chhodo
aur gaane hi he to
yeh taana chhodo

nahi rakhta hu mein
shabdon ki jaadogari
  teri tarah
tum baate banaana chodo

de de mujhe
'dil-nikaala'
berahami se ,
sehjaunga!
mere jaane ka
bahaana chhodo

Prateek

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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2008, 12:18:12 AM »
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simply. amazing creation!! good job deetri1  Clapping Smiley
bahhot acha prateek ji apne bhi jawab diya hai  Applause good job!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2008, 03:25:14 AM »
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re replying prateek ji

ya chhodo ye berukhi
ya phero na nazar
ya phir mujhe bulana chhodo

ya thukara do mujhe
ya apna hi lo
magar yun azmana chhodo
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2008, 03:27:04 AM »
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wah kaya jawab diya hai deetri apne!! Good one!!

Deetri ji, apke is IdName (deetri) ka arth kaya hai?
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2008, 03:31:57 AM »
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my name is deepak tripathi so i took id deetri1
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2008, 03:33:53 AM »
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Thanks Deepak!! App bahoot hi simple shabdo main bahoot gahra likhte hai!! Asha hai aise he apki kavitaye padne ko milati rahegi!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2008, 03:40:03 AM »
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thanx
u all r very good and attentive.
itne achchhe manch par khud ko pesh karna mere liye achchha anubhav hai.
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«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2008, 12:53:27 AM »
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re replying prateek ji

ya chhodo ye berukhi
ya phero na nazar
ya phir mujhe bulana chhodo

ya thukara do mujhe
ya apna hi lo
magar yun azmana chhodo


Aapka andaaz kabile-taaref he deepak bhai,bahut kum aur zarrori shabdon ka prayog kar jo bahut kuch keh jaate he-woh sahi arth mein 'shayar' he!aapka mein bhee kayal hu!
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2010, 05:36:38 PM »
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Achhi nazm hai aapki.....Deepak-ji.... Applause Applause Applause
Achha saath diya hai Prateekji aur Pooja-ji ne bhi... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ya ab aur likho tum
Ya bar bar padhne do
Magar Yoindia pe aana kyu chhood diya tum

ya to sukoon ka thikana chhodo...
ya uski yaado ab aana  chhodo....

ya khushboo bano tum
ya hawa ban jaao....
magar mera ashiyana chhodo...

ya na jaao tum
ya phir na aana...
baharo mujhe satana chhodo...

ya tumhe shauk hai
ya mein hi khilona hoon...
mujhe todna..banaana chhodo...

ya mein jalta hoon
ya tamanna jalti hai...
kuchh to khatir e parwana chhodo...

ya chhodo ye badmasti
ya chhodo ya deewanapan...
ya phir aaj ye maikhana chhodo...

ya to sukoon ka thikana chhodo
ya uski yaado ab aana chhodo....!


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