ek swaal

by NETRAPAL on May 20, 2008, 10:17:23 AM
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Is kadar wo yad karte hai hame
Ankho hee ankho me baya karne wale
Dete hai hai muskrahat ka tofa,
Kal tak jo bhool baithe the hame

Gaflat me hoo khawab hee lagata hai
Unkaa fir aanaa  ek chahat see jagata hai
Jee chata hai thaam loo daaman unka
Par fir us toote hue dil ka khyal ataa hai

Kis kdard wo chate the hame
Har pal pahloo me rahne wale
Dawaa karte the marham bane ka jo
Wahee jakhm gaharaa de gaye the hame

Wo to bhoola baithe the iskadar hamo
Ham hai kee khawabo me unhe hee dekhte hai
Aaj aye hai wo fir ek gujarish ke saath
Kya toote hooe dil ko jod payenge wo..?


Netra…
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2008, 10:20:22 AM »
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Very Nice Netrapal ji..khoob likha hai aapne..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2008, 10:42:55 AM »
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Nice One Netra... Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2008, 10:43:58 AM »
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Nice one Netra Ji
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2008, 12:05:32 PM »
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Very Nice Netrapal ji..khoob likha hai aapne..

thanks haoney ji

netra..
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2008, 12:13:56 PM »
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thanks honey, mahiya, clemira ji for reply

bewafaayee wo kaise kargaye
soorat se lagte the masoom jo
n jane gam kaise  de gaye

kya kamee thee ibbat kee ya
nigahe unchee thee unkee
asheeyana sajane wale hee
khake supurd kar gayee...
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2008, 12:54:55 PM »
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VERY NICE NETRAPAL JI

HAR KISI KE LABO PAR KAI SAWAAL HOTE HAI
OR UN KAI SAWAALO KE JAWAB UNKE HI HUMDARD DETE HAI
MAGAR EK SAWAAL JO HOTA HAI WOH DIL SE HI PUCHA JATA HAI
KYOKI WOH ZINDAGI KA SAWAAL HOTA HAI
SHAYAD HAR KOI KISI KI MAJBOORI KO APNI MOHABBAT NAHI BANATA
KYOKI KUCH LOG MAJBOORI KO HI BAWAFA NAAM DE JATA
PHIR EK SWAAL HOTA KI USNE AISA KYU KIYA
MAGAR WOH KYA JANTI WOH TOH JO SOCHTI WAHI MEHSOOS KARTI
LEKIN JO HOTA KISI KE SATH WOH NA JAAN PATI
PHIR WAHI EK SWAAL KARTA KI WOH MUJHE SAMJH KYU NAHI SAKI
OR WOH SOCHTI SHAYAD MAINE PYAAR KARKE BAHUT BADI BHOOL KAR DI
PHIR WOH SWAAL KARTA KI WOH ABHI BHI NADAAN KYU BANTI KYA WOH MUJHE JANTI NAHI , YAHI SOCH SOCH KE USAY WOH KAHETA RAHETA MERI MAJBOORI KYU NAHI SAMJHTI , OR WOH KAHETI SHAYAD USKI MAJBOORI MERI ZIDNAGI KI DOOORI BAN GAYI OR WOH KAHETA WOH SAMJH GAYI OR WOH SWAAL KARTI HUMARE SATH HI AISA KYU HOTA WOH SOCHTI KASH AISA KABHI NA HOTA........................

YAHI EK SWAAL KITNE SWAAL LEKAR AA JATE
INHI SAWAALO MEIN ZINDAGI BAN JATI YA KHO JATI
MAGAR EK SAWAAL HAR INSAN KE LABO ZAROOR RAHETA HAI
OR SHAYAD RAHEGA , KI KYA TUM MUJHSE PYAAR KARTI YA KARTA HAI....
YAHI SAWAAL ZINDAGI BADAL DETA HAI, DUKH MEIN YA KHUSHI MEIN YAHI EK SAWAAL BAHUT KIMTI HOTA HAI.........]

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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2008, 04:13:51 AM »
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very nice muskaan jee achaa laga aapka jawaab dekh kar

netra...
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2008, 06:26:00 AM »
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hamne bhee kya kya khawab sajaye the
pushp hamne bhee patthro me khilaye the
wo dekho unkee bewafayee ka aalam
pushp hamare se guldaste kahee or sjaaye the

netra..
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2008, 06:51:07 AM »
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bahut khoob netraji
accha likha hai aapne
 muskaanji aapka jawaab bhi zordaar hai...
good.
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2008, 11:46:38 AM »
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bahut khoob netraji
accha likha hai aapne
 muskaanji aapka jawaab bhi zordaar hai...
good.

thanks diya ji for reply

netra..
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2008, 11:52:16 AM »
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thanks NETRAJI AND DIYA JI THANK YOU SO MUCH

KABHI KABHI AISA HO JATA HAI
JISKI HUM AAS RAKHTE WOH KHO JATA HAI
OR DIL MEIN YAHI EK SAWAAL RAHE JATA HAI
KI WOH HUME KYU NAHI SAMJH PATA HAI.......

JAB KOI PATHAR DIL PUSHP ROOP DHARAR KARTA HAI
TOH USME NARMI CHA JATI HAI LEKIN JAB KOI US ROOP KO NAHI SAMJH PATA HAI, TOH USME GARMI CHA JATI HAI..............

*********************************MUSKAN**************************
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2008, 11:54:39 AM »
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thanks NETRAJI AND DIYA JI THANK YOU SO MUCH

KABHI KABHI AISA HO JATA HAI
JISKI HUM AAS RAKHTE WOH KHO JATA HAI
OR DIL MEIN YAHI EK SAWAAL RAHE JATA HAI
KI WOH HUME KYU NAHI SAMJH PATA HAI.......

JAB KOI PATHAR DIL PUSHP ROOP DHARAR KARTA HAI
TOH USME NARMI CHA JATI HAI LEKIN JAB KOI US ROOP KO NAHI SAMJH PATA HAI, TOH USME GARMI CHA JATI HAI..............

*********************************MUSKAN**************************

muskaan is nice saying again,

netra...

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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2008, 04:20:39 AM »
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thanks NETRAJI AND DIYA JI THANK YOU SO MUCH

KABHI KABHI AISA HO JATA HAI
JISKI HUM AAS RAKHTE WOH KHO JATA HAI
OR DIL MEIN YAHI EK SAWAAL RAHE JATA HAI
KI WOH HUME KYU NAHI SAMJH PATA HAI.......

JAB KOI PATHAR DIL PUSHP ROOP DHARAR KARTA HAI
TOH USME NARMI CHA JATI HAI LEKIN JAB KOI US ROOP KO NAHI SAMJH PATA HAI, TOH USME GARMI CHA JATI HAI..............

*********************************MUSKAN**************************

KABHI AISA HOJATA HAI
DIN RAAT ME NAJAR ATAA HAI
SOORAJ KO CHAND SAMAJHTE HAI
GAGAN, DHARA PE NAJAR ATAA HAI

UDTA HAI KAR KOI GAGAN ME
DIL BELGAAM HO JAATA HAI
KHILTEE HAI KALIYAA CHILMAN ME
JAB KOI DIL ME BAS JATAA HAI

NETRA...
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2008, 04:29:41 AM »
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Netra aur muskan bohat hi acha likha hai aapne.. Applause

Ishq Ki Geherai Ko Na Samaj Sake Hum
Ishq Ki Tanhai Ko Dil se Lagaker Soye Hum
Jab Koi Dil Main Bas Jaye Toh Kya Kar Pate Hum
Unki Yaadon Main Din Raat Intezaar Kar Jaate Hum
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