fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by rawattanha on August 31, 2009, 12:15:57 PM

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rawattanha

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kar raha hun fariyaad, teri ek haan ko lau jalayi hai
dur hun tujhse har pal, teri yaad mein apni duniya basayi hai.
sochta har pal tujhe hi ye dill, harsu tere aane ki ummeed lagayi hai
hai bekhabar tu dard se mere, aankhon ne barson se sawan ki barsat bahayi hai.
aja laut ke zindagi meri, maine kabse tere aane ki aass lagayi hai........

Some text are missing. but some line R 2B continueeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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umraan

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 01:06:16 PM »

wah..wah... :clap: Applause

mere tarsde naina di pyaas nhi mukni,
teriya yaadan di hundi eh barsaat nhi mukni,
saah ruk jaane jind muk jaani,
par tenu milan di aas nhi mukni..


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Roja

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2009, 01:09:21 PM »

Bahut accha likha hai... and waiting to read you more Rawat ji..

Lovely lines Umraan ji


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rawattanha

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2009, 10:48:53 AM »

thanx umraan and roja ji,

thak chuka karte karte fariyaad
lagta hai jaise aye koi fir yaad
ibaadate khuda karta roj fir bhi
janib meri ho jaye koi kubul fariyaad


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madhuwesh

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2009, 11:02:19 AM »

Wah wah bahut khoob Rawattanha ji,mindblowing creation,beautiful lines by Umraan ji.


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aaina

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2009, 09:42:16 AM »

very nice lines rawattanha ji


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rawattanha

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2009, 01:08:15 PM »

Quote from: aaina on September 02, 2009, 09:42:16 AM

very nice lines rawattanha ji

shukriya aina ji.


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umraan

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Re: fariyad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2009, 06:17:12 PM »

Quote from: rawattanha on September 01, 2009, 10:48:53 AM

thanx umraan and roja ji,

thak chuka karte karte fariyaad
lagta hai jaise aye koi fir yaad
ibaadate khuda karta roj fir bhi
janib meri ho jaye koi kubul fariyaad

bahut khub...

NA PA ENNI JUDAIYA VE RABBA,
ZEHER TO VI KAUDA E INTZAR HAI RABBA
YAAD CH MAHI DI MERE ANJU BARSDE,
DEED NU USDI MERE NAIN TARADE...