feelings..............dil se dil tak

by smile_deep1 on September 22, 2004, 09:20:50 PM
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«Reply #120 on: December 30, 2004, 07:55:36 PM »
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thanks lovebites
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«Reply #121 on: December 30, 2004, 08:00:51 PM »
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v nice Deep
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«Reply #122 on: December 30, 2004, 08:01:06 PM »
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TUKDEY
kal raat kuch tutta tha,
kisi ki chudi thi,ya kisi ki tasvir.
kisi ka khayal, ya shayad kisi ka dil.
un tukdon ke saath............
siskiyan bhi sunayin padti thi.
todnay wale ki,tutnay wale ki,
kya kahiye............
kisey chubhey woh tukdey
kya kahey...............
fir dil ka ek aur janaza saja dekha tha,
fir ek sejh saji dekhi thi,
kaisay log hain, dil ko bhi nahin chhoda,
ek tod ke dusra saja lete hain,
janaze se aa kar fir ek sejh saja baithay hain.



amazing! mindblowing! really..... hats off!  glasses2
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«Reply #123 on: December 30, 2004, 08:03:29 PM »
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shukriya................. mansi............... heart......... well heart well mind blow karnay kai liye uska hona bhi jaroori hain ................ well how will u know?................. lolz..............

well shukriya yaron.................
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«Reply #124 on: December 30, 2004, 08:10:40 PM »
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LOL......wo to meri baat kar raha tha Deep
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #125 on: December 30, 2004, 08:12:55 PM »
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galat fehmi hai bachchi tujhko ..... mansi......

main to bhool k bhi tere baare mein na sochun....

hansi aa jaayegi naa :mrgreen:
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #126 on: December 30, 2004, 08:12:59 PM »
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oho............... well u r gr8 no doubt............. well now mez leaving u all take care............
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«Reply #127 on: December 31, 2004, 12:11:10 AM »
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TUKDEY
kal raat kuch tutta tha,
kisi ki choodi thi,ya kisi ki tasvir.
kisi ka khayal, ya shayad kisi ka dil.
un tukdon ke saath............
siskiyan bhi sunayin padti thi.
todnay wale ki,tutnay wale ki,
kya kahiye............
kisey chubhey woh tukdey
kya kahey...............
fir dil ka ek aur janaza saja dekha tha,
fir ek sejh saji dekhi thi,
kaisay log hain, dil ko bhi nahin chhoda,
ek tod ke dusra saja lete hain,
janaze se aa kar fir ek sejh saja baithay hain.


Beautiful Smile....VVG Usual Smile
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #128 on: December 31, 2004, 05:12:27 AM »
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Nice all!!!
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #129 on: December 31, 2004, 07:31:02 AM »
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thanku everyone.............................happy9
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #130 on: December 31, 2004, 07:59:52 AM »
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MERA MAAN
log kehtey hain mere jivan main gum nahin,
shayad isliye kai meri ankhein num nahin.
ankhein meri rona bhi chahey to......
mera maan unhey manaa hi leta hain,
mere under hi unhey,panaah deta hain.
mere maan ne un aasuon se mujhko sicha hain,
mere maan main dukhon ka ek bagicha hain.
unkey phool sab ko hasate hain,
woh hasnay wale kya janay,
woh phool mere aasuon se sichey jate hain
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #131 on: December 31, 2004, 08:04:30 AM »
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nice poem
especially

log kehtey hain mere jivan main gum nahin,
shayad isliye kai meri ankhein num nahin



very nice deep. keep it up
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #132 on: December 31, 2004, 08:10:14 AM »
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thank u heart................ ur comments r always special to me
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #133 on: December 31, 2004, 09:12:51 AM »
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it was nice deep
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lovebites
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«Reply #134 on: December 31, 2004, 05:28:40 PM »
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unkey phool sab ko hasate hain,
woh hasnay wale kya janay,
woh phool mere aasuon se sichey jate hain


Bohat achey Deep............!
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