feelings..............dil se dil tak

by smile_deep1 on September 22, 2004, 09:20:50 PM
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«Reply #150 on: January 06, 2005, 07:19:19 AM »
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JO APNAY DIL SE HO...

Apni sachi mohabbat bayan karna chaha,
per shabdh kamjoor  padtey hain zalim,
meri mohabbat ke ruh-b-ruh.
Chaha tha us nazam main woh suroor ho,
ke mera sanam usay padnay ko majboor ho.
Chaha tha janay woh mere junoon-e-ishq ko,
jaan kar chah meri, mujhay chahnay ko majboor ho.
Chaha tha is chubhti sachai ko ,
main shabdo main sawar dun.
sabdh nahin mile ki jinse main unhey nikhar dun.
Chaha chura le humkisi aur ke khayal ko,
mushkil hain kisi aur ka khayal,mere khayal sa ho.
Muskurayin meri  kalam aur keh gayin humay,
"Aye mohabbat ke musafir dil ko chuti hain nazam woh,
jo sidhey apnay dil se  ho...



wahhhhhhhhhhhh dear bahut khoobbbbbbbb nice n gr88888888 :D
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #151 on: January 06, 2005, 07:22:53 AM »
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thank u salma ji.............. shukriya
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«Reply #152 on: January 06, 2005, 07:33:07 AM »
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heyyyyy plz no" ji" :D salma bola shakti ho aap deep ji :lol:
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«Reply #153 on: January 06, 2005, 07:35:54 AM »
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khud ji laga kar ,
humay ji hatanay ko kehtey ho,
khud gustakhi kar ke,
humay sudhar janay ko kehtey ho.
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«Reply #154 on: January 06, 2005, 07:41:36 AM »
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lolzzzzz deep

humari gustakhi ko kardo maaf mere dost,
nahin laga dubara hum aap ke naam se ji mere dost :D
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«Reply #155 on: January 06, 2005, 08:17:35 AM »
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wah!!!!!!!!!  deep...............salma jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii  :lol:
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #156 on: January 06, 2005, 06:41:56 PM »
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thanks waheed ji
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veeki
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«Reply #157 on: January 06, 2005, 07:37:02 PM »
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thanx salma   bahoot  khub bahoot khubbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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«Reply #158 on: January 06, 2005, 07:37:40 PM »
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awesome Deep! really touchin :wink:
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #159 on: January 06, 2005, 07:45:34 PM »
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thanks veeki and mansi.........................
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«Reply #160 on: January 24, 2005, 07:30:47 AM »
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KYA KAHEIN AAPSE...

aaj jo nikle jara hum ghumnay,
raste ko dekha aur muskura diye.
ankhey jo uthai dekhnay ko asman,
samnay dekha to tum thai khade.
muskurai aur tumko lagaya gale,
aur fir awaz ayin "sab khair to hain?"
dekha to woh tum nahin meri mummy thi!
muskurai main, aur boli ki main chali.
aa rahin thi khud per humko hasi,
raah chalte log mujhay hi to dekhetey rahey,
dekhtey kyun na jo khud se batain kar ,
hum thai hus rahey...
thodi tumse khayalon main batain thi ho rahin,
ghar ja ker ainay main khud ko jo dekha jara,
dekh kar ayinay main tumko main has padi.
maa ne kaha "lo ye bawali ho gayin".
dhekhiye to jara humara kya kiya,
thik thai pehlay aab pagal bana diya.
kya kahey aapse ki kis tarah tum yadon main shamil ho...


WELL FRNDS BAHUT DIN BAAD KUCH LIKHA HAIN MAINAY..... ANY KINDA COMMENT IS WELCOME...... WITH A SMILE  happy9
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«Reply #161 on: January 24, 2005, 07:40:11 AM »
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KYA KAHEIN AAPSE...

aaj jo nikle jara hum ghumnay,
raste ko dekha aur muskura diye.
ankhey jo uthai dekhnay ko asman,
samnay dekha to tum thai khade.
muskurai aur tumko lagaya gale,
aur fir awaz ayin "sab khair to hain?"
dekha to woh tum nahin meri mummy thi!
muskurai main, aur boli ki main chali.
aa rahin thi khud per humko hasi,
raah chalte log mujhay hi to dekhetey rahey,
dekhtey kyun na jo khud se batain kar ,
hum thai hus rahey...
thodi tumse khayalon main batain thi ho rahin,
ghar ja ker ainay main khud ko jo dekha jara,
dekh kar ayinay main tumko main has padi.
maa ne kaha "lo ye bawali ho gayin".
dhekhiye to jara humara kya kiya,
thik thai pehlay aab pagal bana diya.
kya kahey aapse ki kis tarah tum yadon main shamil ho...


WELL FRNDS BAHUT DIN BAAD KUCH LIKHA HAIN MAINAY..... ANY KINDA COMMENT IS WELCOME...... WITH A SMILE  happy9


bahot khoob deep.... very nice  Usual Smile
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«Reply #162 on: January 24, 2005, 12:20:32 PM »
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KYA KAHEIN AAPSE...

aaj jo nikle jara hum ghumnay,
raste ko dekha aur muskura diye.
ankhey jo uthai dekhnay ko asman,
samnay dekha to tum thai khade.
muskurai aur tumko lagaya gale,
aur fir awaz ayin "sab khair to hain?"
dekha to woh tum nahin meri mummy thi!
muskurai main, aur boli ki main chali.
aa rahin thi khud per humko hasi,
raah chalte log mujhay hi to dekhetey rahey,
dekhtey kyun na jo khud se batain kar ,
hum thai hus rahey...
thodi tumse khayalon main batain thi ho rahin,
ghar ja ker ainay main khud ko jo dekha jara,
dekh kar ayinay main tumko main has padi.
maa ne kaha "lo ye bawali ho gayin".
dhekhiye to jara humara kya kiya,
thik thai pehlay aab pagal bana diya.
kya kahey aapse ki kis tarah tum yadon main shamil ho...


WELL FRNDS BAHUT DIN BAAD KUCH LIKHA HAIN MAINAY..... ANY KINDA COMMENT IS WELCOME...... WITH A SMILE  happy9


bahot khoob deep.... very nice  Usual Smile


too khool yar... Usual Smile

Us ne phir poocha
Us ne phir poocha meri khamoshi ka sabab,
Is rangein duniya mein udasi ka sabab..

Is terha toot kay chahne ka sabab,
yun apne dil mein Basane ka sabab..

Har lamha us ko sochne ka sabab,
apne naam Se yun jorne ka sabab..

Bahoon mein rakhne ki tamana ka sabab,
labon se choone ki tamana ka sabab..

Juda ho janay kay dar ka sabab,
kho janay kay dar ka sabab..

Bichar janay kay dar ka sabab,
bhool janay kay dar ka sabab..

kia kahoon mein...kia kehta
bas yahi keh saka...Kay
tum meri ho
mujhay tum se mohabat hai.
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«Reply #163 on: January 24, 2005, 08:00:09 PM »
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wah!!
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«Reply #164 on: January 24, 2005, 09:23:34 PM »
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YEHI KAHOON GA  K AAP BHI SUPERB HO MERI TRAH

                       WAH WAH WAH
              (*_*)

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