!!!..Ghayal..!!!

by nashwani on August 21, 2013, 01:04:17 AM
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Dharti ki bechaini dekh hua hai paagal,,
Barasne ki khwahish me hai aaj baadal..

Nazaro se nazare milane ka hua yun asar,,
Madhosh saa karr gayaa unka wo kaajal..

Shabd ghazalo.N ke phir na bhatke unse,,
Jabse suni, cham cham karti unki paayal..

Pyar me to unke pyar beshumaar aya hi,,
Unka roothna bhi kar gaya unka kaayal..

Na khanjar se hue the, na gola barood se,,
Ham to hue the kaatil adaao.N se ghayal..
   
Na koi aur manzil dikhi, na koi rasta mila,,
Ham to bas chal diye pakad unka aanchal..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2013, 01:20:33 AM »
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very very very......beautiful bhaiya............
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2013, 01:35:48 AM »
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shukriya shads..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2013, 01:55:18 AM »
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nice one
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2013, 03:07:09 AM »
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बहुत खुभ नास्वानी जी
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2013, 03:11:39 AM »
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bhut khub....
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2013, 08:38:17 AM »
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bahut khoob
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Dharti ki bechaini dekh hua hai paagal,,
Barasne ki khwahish me hai aaj baadal..

Waaaaaaaaah...............

Nazaro se nazare milane ka hua yun asar,,
Madhosh saa karr gayaa unka wo kaajal..

kya baat hai............

Shabd ghazalo.N ke phir na bhatke unse,,
Jabse suni, cham cham karti unki paayal..

Superb.............


Pyar me to unke pyar beshumaar aya hi,,
Unka roothna bhi kar gaya unka kaayal..

Wowwwwwwwwwwwww........


Na khanjar se hue the, na gola barood se,,
Ham to hue the kaatil adaao.N se ghayal..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
    
Na koi aur manzil dikhi, na koi rasta mila,,
Ham to bas chal diye pakad unka aanchal..!!! /font][/color]

waah waah waah..........


Waah waah waah Nashwani dhamakedaar peshkash... bahut khoobsurat ehsaas.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaad is khoob kalaam par...

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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2013, 01:47:38 PM »
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Dharti ki bechaini dekh hua hai paagal,,
Barasne ki khwahish me hai aaj baadal..

Nazaro se nazare milane ka hua yun asar,,
Madhosh saa karr gayaa unka wo kaajal..

Shabd ghazalo.N ke phir na bhatke unse,,
Jabse suni, cham cham karti unki paayal..

Pyar me to unke pyar beshumaar aya hi,,
Unka roothna bhi kar gaya unka kaayal..

Na khanjar se hue the, na gola barood se,,
Ham to hue the kaatil adaao.N se ghayal..
   
Na koi aur manzil dikhi, na koi rasta mila,,
Ham to bas chal diye pakad unka aanchal..!!! Ñ

Na koi aur manzil dikhi, na koi rasta mila,,
Ham to bas chal diye pakad unka aanchal..!!! Ñ
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waah waah ashwani bhai.. bahut khoobsurat kalaam..

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bahut khoob.....kya baat hai......bahut khoob.....
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