GIRDAB-E-ISHQ

by saaz_haldwanvi on April 19, 2009, 05:07:15 AM
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 Yahi achcha hai ke ab hum tum juda ho le
 aye ashna ajnabi hone ka bhi tajurba ho le
 rukhsat hone se pahele aa ek dua ho le
 ke baqa-e-wafa[remaining love]ka fir na badguma ho le
 'jo chaha tha tune sab paya hai
  jo saheje the gum maine ab numaya hai'
 
 yaad kar jo sath gujari thi wo raat
 jheel ke pass baithe gujari thi wo raat
 sunte rahe tujhe bakadre jouk-e-vasl[beloved togetherness]nawazi thi wo raat
 abr ne baras kar aur sawari thi wo raat
  'ke jab khof-e-judai se har lamha sahma hua tha
   lipat kar mujh se tum royi thi main roya tha'
 
 Aah wo tishnagi meri kayamat ka asar rakhti thi
 jab ke dil ki sochi har baat pura asar rakhti thi
 vasl ki raat har pal ki khabar rakhti thi
 jab muntaziri ka hisab chasme-tar rakhti thi
  'dekh ke meri ebadat pe na mera ikhtiyar hua
   main ke khud apni tabahi ka talabgaar hua'

 Soj-e-mukhalfat[fire of rebel]teri wo joshe-junnu tera
 khub tha rahe ulfat main ibtda-e-tulu[begining of bigning]tera
 wo parastis teri wo jarf-e-wafa se wuju tera
 wo kya bharam tha ya faqat kurb-e-sukun tera[desire of togetherness]
  'umre-nadaa thi tab ab pukhta-e-shabab ho
   "SAAZ" ab kya sawal ho ab kya jawab ho'
 
 Kabhi samjha tha na kabhi samajh paya
 kyun girdab-e-ishq[fasten in love]hua aur gume-kafas paya
 yaade jaan-bakhsh ko betartib besabab paya
 ta umr jo bhula na ja sake wo sabak paya
  'ab bharam tute ab ho dua ka asar shayad
   pa sako tum koi rehbar hum sa magar shayad'  " saaz haldwanvi" written on 8 march 98,
 
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2009, 08:20:23 AM »
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  PURAANI MOHABBAT KI YAAD NAHIN JAATI.

  PURAANI SHRAAB KAA NASHAA NAHIN UTARTAA.....


  BAHAUT KHOOB SAAZ SB


  K_A
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2009, 08:34:26 AM »
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Bohot hi Khoob Saaz_haldwanvi Ji...bohot khoobsurat hai aapki ye peshkash !!
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2009, 07:32:09 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 19, 2009, 08:20:23 AM
  PURAANI MOHABBAT KI YAAD NAHIN JAATI.

  PURAANI SHRAAB KAA NASHAA NAHIN UTARTAA.....


  BAHAUT KHOOB SAAZ SB


  K_A         khamoshi se jo sada di jati hai
              uski frequency janab bahut duur talak jati hai,
               sukriya------ saaz   
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2009, 07:34:20 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 19, 2009, 08:34:26 AM
Bohot hi Khoob Saaz_haldwanvi Ji...bohot khoobsurat hai aapki ye peshkash !!
shukriya mohtarma shukriya,te nazm hamari ladak pan ki nishani hai----'saaz'
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2009, 08:01:49 AM »
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"ab bharam tute ke ab ho dua ka asar shayad
pa sako tum koi rehbar hum sa magr sahyad"

saaz sahab halduwani bhut khoobsurat jagah aur utna hi khoobsurat aapka kalaam,  kya kahu.n alfaaz dhoond rha hu.n tareef ke liyn mil nhi rhe aur jo kuch hain wo aage aane se sharma rhe hain, bhut hi khoob kha hai aapne bhut bhut shukriya itna umda kalaam paish karne ke liyn yaqenan aapse bhut kuch seekhne ko milega........ 
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2009, 08:27:29 AM »
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Subahn Allah, Saaz Ji, Dil Se Daad Nikli Hai Aapke Is Kalaam Par, Kabool Karein,.

Aur Please Hamaare beech Hamaare Saath rahein Aap,.
Hum Sab Ka Hausla Banaa Rahega,.

Thank U,.
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2009, 06:31:57 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 20, 2009, 08:01:49 AM
"ab bharam tute ke ab ho dua ka asar shayad
pa sako tum koi rehbar hum sa magr sahyad"

saaz sahab halduwani bhut khoobsurat jagah aur utna hi khoobsurat aapka kalaam,  kya kahu.n alfaaz dhoond rha hu.n tareef ke liyn mil nhi rhe aur jo kuch hain wo aage aane se sharma rhe hain, bhut hi khoob kha hai aapne bhut bhut shukriya itna umda kalaam paish karne ke liyn yaqenan aapse bhut kuch seekhne ko milega........ 
aaina ji shukriya, shikhane shikhane ki baat se ek sh_er nikal aaya hai yu hi,aapke janib pais hai ki--"kat ra hoon main lekin samunder ki gahrayi rakhta hoon/ aa doob ke dekh mujh me ki aapna ek vajud apna ek makam rakhta hoon.
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2009, 06:37:44 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 20, 2009, 08:27:29 AM
Subahn Allah, Saaz Ji, Dil Se Daad Nikli Hai Aapke Is Kalaam Par, Kabool Karein,.

Aur Please Hamaare beech Hamaare Saath rahein Aap,.
Hum Sab Ka Hausla Banaa Rahega,.

Thank U,.
shukriya jaa_nashin /aap pukar ke to dekhen, main to harf-e-sukhan hoon ,aake aas-pass hoon,
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2009, 10:02:02 PM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 20, 2009, 06:31:57 PM
aaina ji shukriya, shikhane shikhane ki baat se ek sh_er nikal aaya hai yu hi,aapke janib pais hai ki--"kat ra hoon main lekin samunder ki gahrayi rakhta hoon/ aa doob ke dekh mujh me ki aapna ek vajud apna ek makam rakhta hoon.

bhut khoob saaz sahab........................
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2009, 01:58:39 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Saaz_halwanvi ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2009, 02:33:24 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on April 19, 2009, 05:07:15 AM
Yahi achcha hai ke ab hum tum juda ho le
 aye ashna ajnabi hone ka bhi tajurba ho le
 rukhsat hone se pahele aa ek dua ho le
 ke baqa-e-wafa[remaining love]ka fir na badguma ho le
 'jo chaha tha tune sab paya hai
  jo saheje the gum maine ab numaya hai'
 
 yaad kar jo sath gujari thi wo raat
 jheel ke pass baithe gujari thi wo raat
 sunte rahe tujhe bakadre jouk-e-vasl[beloved togetherness]nawazi thi wo raat
 abr ne baras kar aur sawari thi wo raat
  'ke jab khof-e-judai se har lamha sahma hua tha
   lipat kar mujh se tum royi thi main roya tha'
 
 Aah wo tishnagi meri kayamat ka asar rakhti thi
 jab ke dil ki sochi har baat pura asar rakhti thi
 vasl ki raat har pal ki khabar rakhti thi
 jab muntaziri ka hisab chasme-tar rakhti thi
  'dekh ke meri ebadat pe na mera ikhtiyar hua
   main ke khud apni tabahi ka talabgaar hua'

 Soj-e-mukhalfat[fire of rebel]teri wo joshe-junnu tera
 khub tha rahe ulfat main ibtda-e-tulu[begining of bigning]tera
 wo parastis teri wo jarf-e-wafa se wuju tera
 wo kya bharam tha ya faqat kurb-e-sukun tera[desire of togetherness]
  'umre-nadaa thi tab ab pukhta-e-shabab ho
   "SAAZ" ab kya sawal ho ab kya jawab ho'
 
 Kabhi samjha tha na kabhi samajh paya
 kyun girdab-e-ishq[fasten in love]hua aur gume-kafas paya
 yaade jaan-bakhsh ko betartib besabab paya
 ta umr jo bhula na ja sake wo sabak paya
  'ab bharam tute ab ho dua ka asar shayad
   pa sako tum koi rehbar hum sa magar shayad'  " saaz haldwanvi" written on 8 march 98,
 


WAAH SAAZ JEE...
BAHUT KHOOB......
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2009, 07:15:56 AM »
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Aslam ne jo jaha bas mujhe bhi wahi dohrana hain....Bohat Khoob peshkash Saaz...
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 07:56:56 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 21, 2009, 01:58:39 AM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Saaz_halwanvi ji.. Thumbs UP
shukriya roja
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2009, 07:57:56 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 21, 2009, 02:33:24 AM
WAAH SAAZ JEE...
BAHUT KHOOB......
bahut shukriya
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