-----/// Guzaarish ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on October 22, 2012, 09:06:20 PM
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Ek guzaarish kalam se....

ae kalam mere kuch likhwaa mujhse aisaa
padh ke unke chehre pe muskaan aa jaaye

sharmaake chehraa chhipaa len aanchal mein
jab khat me unhe meraa chehraa nazar aaye

khat ko mere wo chhoo len apne hothon se
aur agle pal wo khud se hi sharmaa jaaye

aaj kuch aisaa asar kar is kore kaagaz pe
mehek mein mohabbat ke wo bhi mehek jaaye

Aur ek guzaarish khat se.....


titli se rang le ke unko tu aisaa rangnaa
ki saaton rang me khushi ke wo rang jaaye

haalat meri bataanaa, unkaa bhi poochh aanaa
kuch aisaa jaaduu karnaa ki wo bas muskuraaye

banke tu baadal jaanaa, aur jaake baras jaanaa
kuch is tarhaa tu barasnaa, ki wo bheeg jaaye

unke paas jaanaa, wahaan shaam tak thaharnaa
unko tu baahar laanaa, jab chaand nikal aaye

chandaa ko main dekhungaa, unko bhi tu dikhaanaa
aur chaand ke chehre me mujhe wo nazar aa jaaye


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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 09:34:11 PM »
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Kamal kar diya Hirday ji MUBARIK
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2012, 12:50:11 AM »
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achhe prateek banaaye hai qalam aur khat ko daad daad
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2012, 01:27:25 AM »
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wah wah hriday ji, maja aa gaya Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2012, 02:29:51 AM »
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Hariday ji bahut behtreen tarike se kalam aur khat k jariye ek aashik k dil ki bat likhi hai....waah waah waah bahut hi khoob....
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2012, 02:31:58 AM »
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Waah waah Kapil bhayya aaj kal to aap gajab dhaa rahe ho.
Ek se barkar dil kalaam kah rahe ho.
Bahut achche. Aese hi likhte raho.
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2012, 03:53:41 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub hridayji
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2012, 04:06:44 AM »
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Ek guzaarish kalam se....

ae kalam mere kuch likhwaa mujhse aisaa
padh ke unke chehre pe muskaan aa jaaye

sharmaake chehraa chhipaa len aanchal mein
jab khat me unhe meraa chehraa nazar aaye

khat ko mere wo chhoo len apne hothon se
aur agle pal wo khud se hi sharmaa jaaye

aaj kuch aisaa asar kar is kore kaagaz pe
mehek mein mohabbat ke wo bhi mehek jaaye

Aur ek guzaarish khat se.....


titli se rang le ke unko tu aisaa rangnaa
ki saaton rang me khushi ke wo rang jaaye

haalat meri bataanaa, unkaa bhi poochh aanaa
kuch aisaa jaaduu karnaa ki wo bas muskuraaye

banke tu baadal jaanaa, aur jaake baras jaanaa
kuch is tarhaa tu barasnaa, ki wo bheeg jaaye

unke paas jaanaa, wahaan shaam tak thaharnaa
unko tu baahar laanaa, jab chaand nikal aaye

chandaa ko main dekhungaa, unko bhi tu dikhaanaa
aur chaand ke chehre me mujhe wo nazar aa jaaye


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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2012, 04:38:44 AM »
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Bahut Khub Aur Bahut Bariki Se Sanjoya Hain Khat Aur Kalam Ko Hriday Ji Aapne Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2012, 06:21:21 AM »
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Ek guzaarish kalam se....

ae kalam mere kuch likhwaa mujhse aisaa
padh ke unke chehre pe muskaan aa jaaye  Applause Applause Applause

sharmaake chehraa chhipaa len aanchal mein
jab khat me unhe meraa chehraa nazar aaye  Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah

khat ko mere wo chhoo len apne hothon se
aur agle pal wo khud se hi sharmaa jaaye  Giggle kya baat hai.

aaj kuch aisaa asar kar is kore kaagaz pe
mehek mein mohabbat ke wo bhi mehek jaaye
  Applause Applause bahut khoob

Aur ek guzaarish khat se.....


titli se rang le ke unko tu aisaa rangnaa
ki saaton rang me khushi ke wo rang jaaye  Applause Applause Applause

haalat meri bataanaa, unkaa bhi poochh aanaa
kuch aisaa jaaduu karnaa ki wo bas muskuraaye  Applause Applause

banke tu baadal jaanaa, aur jaake baras jaanaa
kuch is tarhaa tu barasnaa, ki wo bheeg jaaye  Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah

unke paas jaanaa, wahaan shaam tak thaharnaa
unko tu baahar laanaa, jab chaand nikal aaye  Applause Applause bhai waaaaaaaaaaah

chandaa ko main dekhungaa, unko bhi tu dikhaanaa
aur chaand ke chehre me mujhe wo nazar aa jaaye
  Applause Applause kya baat hai


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aapka ye andaaz bahut pyara laga hriday jee
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2012, 03:20:58 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat..........so beautiful.....beautifully written...........bahut h khoob hriday ji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2012, 03:25:43 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2012, 02:29:06 AM »
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kya baat hai hridayji bahut hi lajawab peshkash hai aap hamesha hi bahut achcha likhte hai dheron daad kubool kare
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2012, 02:30:10 PM »
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Aapki Yeh Guzaarish Dil Ko chhoo Gai Kapil Bhai.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Pyaare Alfaaz Likhe hain aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen Bhai..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2012, 10:19:24 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sushil ji....!!!

Kamal kar diya Hirday ji MUBARIK
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