Haan pehli baar...

by brokenbyluv on April 14, 2010, 11:44:12 AM
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Pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi merri ruh mein utar gaya,

pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi merri nigaho se sanwar gaya,

pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi khamoshi se dil ki gali se guzar gaya,

pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi merri adao se nikhar gaya,

aaj pehli baar aesa laga..JAISI KOI BIN CHHUE HI MERRI SANSO MEIN BIKHAR GAYA......
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2010, 11:45:02 AM »
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Bohot pyaari lines likhi hain....Bohot khoob BBL Ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 11:50:29 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji...

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 11:54:18 AM »
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Shukriya celmira ji n khwaish ji...
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2010, 06:47:40 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2010, 07:38:51 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai        brokenluv ji......


Haan peheli baar aisa laga mere dil kisi pe aaya hai
Haan peheli baar aisa laga maine apna muqadar paya hai....
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 07:44:00 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Geet ji,matlab aapko mahesoos hua. tongue3 lovely creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft  Winking Is it SO!
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2010, 10:07:35 AM »
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Bahot achha likha hai BBL ji. Bade hi purkashish andaaz aur nafaasat se likhi hui hai ye poem.
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2010, 07:50:06 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji,cara ji,madhuji n riyaz ji...

Cara ji bahut khoob likha apne..

Madhuji mehsus tou kabse ho raha hai bus lab khamosh hai..
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2010, 06:05:37 AM »
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Bahut hi achchhi lekh prastut ki hai aap ne Geet Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2010, 07:58:48 AM »
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Pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi merri ruh mein utar gaya,

pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi merri nigaho se sanwar gaya,

pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi khamoshi se dil ki gali se guzar gaya,

pehli baar aesa laga jaise koi merri adao se nikhar gaya,

aaj pehli baar aesa laga..JAISI KOI BIN CHHUE HI MERRI SANSO MEIN BIKHAR GAYA......


Beautiful lines Dear...

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«Reply #11 on: April 16, 2010, 12:25:32 PM »
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Thnx alot saba ji n rajesh ji..
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