Haar huyee meyree barhee

by abdbundeli on October 21, 2008, 04:55:31 PM
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Haar huyee meyree barhee,
Aur, gaye tum jeet!
Jeeto baarambaar tum,
Meyrey man key meet!!

      - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2008, 05:14:16 PM »
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Haar huyee meyree barhee,
Aur, gaye tum jeet!
Jeeto baarambaar tum,
Meyrey man key meet!!

      - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli

Haar ke bhi hui hai teri jeet
Kyon ki mil gayee hai man ki meet
Ayesi haar ko haa nahi kahte
Jis mein haar ke bhi hoti hai jeet
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2008, 02:30:22 AM »
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Waah abd ji waah bohot hi khoob, ye andaaz ye alfaaz kya kehne.  Applause
Rajesh ji bohot umda zabardast jawaab hai, bohot khoob janaab waah... Applause


In baaton se mujhe wo geet yaad aagaya "Is shart pe khelungi ulfat ki piya baazi = jeetun to tujhe paaun haarun to piya teri"  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2008, 04:49:32 AM »
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Waah abd ji waah bohot hi khoob, ye andaaz ye alfaaz kya kehne.  Applause
Rajesh ji bohot umda zabardast jawaab hai, bohot khoob janaab waah... Applause


In baaton se mujhe wo geet yaad aagaya "Is shart pe khelungi ulfat ki piya baazi = jeetun to tujhe paaun haarun to piya teri"  Usual Smile
Sayyid Randeri ji!
Waaaah, kyaa hi aasmaanee soofiyaanah kalaam hai yeh, janaab!

Pooraa padhhney ko, gar, miley to mazah aa jaaye!
 Zehn ko may yahee miley to mazah aa jaaye!
                 
              - abd bundeli
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karndhar
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2008, 05:42:27 AM »
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Hi abdbundeli ji !

I am Sanjay Karndhar "karndhar"
I hope you remember me.
Recently you did a favour to me on Shers.in

Your creation is really nice.
It has got a great appeal and is full of emotions.
Keep it up !

Are you from Bundelkhand region.
If yes, which region ?
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2008, 06:14:45 AM »
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karndhar ji,
Thanks, you remembered me!
I'm from NOWGONG (BKD), a town on Jhansi-Khajuraho (Highway: NH 76); 106 Km from Jhansi. Khajuraho is 77Km from here. Please use 'My Messages' for such communications (PMs).
                       - abd bundeli
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2008, 07:16:11 AM »
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Waah abd ji waah bohot hi khoob, ye andaaz ye alfaaz kya kehne.  Applause
Rajesh ji bohot umda zabardast jawaab hai, bohot khoob janaab waah... Applause


In baaton se mujhe wo geet yaad aagaya "Is shart pe khelungi ulfat ki piya baazi = jeetun to tujhe paaun haarun to piya teri"  Usual Smile

Thanks for the compliment Sayyid Randeri Ji
Geet bhi achchi hai
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2008, 07:54:08 AM »
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bachpan me suni thi kahani
jawani me yaad aayee hain
angoor jo na mile lomdi ko
angoor khatte hone ki tohmat lagayee hain

                                -sg-

(just kidding) great lines abd jee
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2008, 08:08:00 AM »
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Thanks, sajid_ghayel ji!

Kabhi haar mein jeet hai,
Kabhi jeet mein haar!
Yahee preeti ki reeti hai,
Yahee paraspar pyaar!!

    - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli     
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