Hamari Tarah Tumhe Kaun Chahega............Touhid

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Tum agar chahogi to koi mil hi jayega.,
Par hamari tarah tumhe kaun chahega.,
Tumhe jarur koi chahto ki nazro se dekhega.,
Par wo aankhe hamari kahan se layega.,

Koi na koi tere jarur kareeb aayega.,
Par hamsa ehsas na tujhme jaga payega.,
Koi jarur tumse tehjeeb se se bate karega.,
Par wo salika-e-andaz labo ka hamari kaha layega.,

Ye bhi ho ke tujhe koi dil se chahega.,
Par mujhsa jaan nisar karne walw na payega.,
Dhokhe bahut milinge tumhe auro se jaan-e-ghazal.,
Kyon ki wo fir Touhid ka dil kahin se na la payega..,
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2011, 02:04:36 AM »
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Khoob Touhid jee..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2011, 11:33:51 AM »
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Khoob Touhid jee..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!

Shukriya Rahim sahab.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2011, 11:43:00 AM »
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wah kya khub likha hai aap ne .....parshansniye.....
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2011, 12:57:44 PM »
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  Touhid Ji,

  Bahut khoob. Wah bhai Wah! Daad Kabul kijiye.


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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2011, 12:59:51 PM »
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Tum agar chahogi to koi mil hi jayega.,
Par hamari tarah tumhe kaun chahega.,
Tumhe jarur koi chahto ki nazro se dekhega.,
Par wo aankhe hamari kahan se layega.,

Koi na koi tere jarur kareeb aayega.,
Par hamsa ehsas na tujhme jaga payega.,
Koi jarur tumse tehjeeb se se bate karega.,
Par wo salika-e-andaz labo ka hamari kaha layega.,

Ye bhi ho ke tujhe koi dil se chahega.,
Par mujhsa jaan nisar karne walw na payega.,
Dhokhe bahut milinge tumhe auro se jaan-e-ghazal.,
Kyon ki wo fir Touhid ka dil kahin se na la payega..,


good..........!
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2011, 01:00:44 PM »
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wah kya khub likha hai aap ne .....parshansniye.....

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Hamare Ghazal ko pasand kiya aapne... khushi hui... Usual Smile Usual Smile
Aise hi sath dete rahiye...
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2011, 01:02:19 PM »
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  Touhid Ji,

  Bahut khoob. Wah bhai Wah! Daad Kabul kijiye.


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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2011, 01:04:26 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 08, 2011, 02:07:43 PM »
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yaad aaye to muskura lena
udasi jo chhaye to khat vo saare jala lena
aanhen na bharna tanhai me
machalti saanso pe kaboo pa lena

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yaad aaye to muskura lena
udasi jo chhaye to khat vo saare jala lena
aanhen na bharna tanhai me
machalti saanso pe kaboo pa lena

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bht khoob Tauhid-- Usual Smile

wah wah bahut khoob sarfira ji... Usual Smile
shukriya..
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«Reply #11 on: September 08, 2011, 02:22:32 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Touhid Ji..

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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2011, 03:23:22 PM »
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tauhid ji bahut achha likha hai.
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2011, 03:58:10 PM »
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hmmmm wah bahut khub touhid bhai.....
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Touhid Ji..

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