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by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 19, 2010, 01:34:30 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 26, 2010, 01:50:31 AM »
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kamaaal ka likha hai aapne Koyal ji... really it's too good... dil khush kar diya apne.... bahut achcha likha hai...!!!

shamaa hai tu parwane hum bhi kam nahi,
na mil saka saath tera to hume gum nahi,

jal jaayenge teri lau me aag banke,
dar jaayen aashiqui se aise hum nahi,

kya hua jo tere aashiq hazaaron hai to,
hamaari chahat jaisa kisi ki chahat me dum nahi,

dekh le aazmaa ke hamaari chaahat ko tu,
humse hai zamaana , zamaane se hum nahi...
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«Reply #16 on: August 26, 2010, 04:00:57 AM »
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wahhhhh ji waahhhhhhhh........

kya kaha hai dono ne

toooo goooddddd koyal and kapil ji
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«Reply #17 on: August 26, 2010, 05:19:39 AM »
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thank you soooooo much Kasak ji....!!!
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«Reply #18 on: August 26, 2010, 06:18:54 AM »
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bohat acha likha aapne....
hanste hue chehro se hai bazaar ki zinnat
rone ki yahan waise bhi fursat nhi milti.......
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«Reply #19 on: August 26, 2010, 06:23:41 AM »
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koyal ji apne bht aacha likha he........

apne jo likha he uske jawab me kuch he mere paas kuch months pahle lkiha tha....agar mil gaya to post karunga....

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«Reply #20 on: August 27, 2010, 04:18:25 PM »
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Thanks kapilji.....good reply.........

kamaaal ka likha hai aapne Koyal ji... really it's too good... dil khush kar diya apne.... bahut achcha likha hai...!!!

shamaa hai tu parwane hum bhi kam nahi,
na mil saka saath tera to hume gum nahi,

jal jaayenge teri lau me aag banke,
dar jaayen aashiqui se aise hum nahi,

kya hua jo tere aashiq hazaaron hai to,
hamaari chahat jaisa kisi ki chahat me dum nahi,

dekh le aazmaa ke hamaari chaahat ko tu,
humse hai zamaana , zamaane se hum nahi...

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«Reply #21 on: August 27, 2010, 04:20:13 PM »
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Aapse tariff sun-ne ko tou mai lalayit rehti hu...Ksak-di.....thanks a lot di.....



wahhhhh ji waahhhhhhhh........

kya kaha hai dono ne

toooo goooddddd koyal and kapil ji
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«Reply #22 on: August 27, 2010, 04:22:09 PM »
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Apka shukriya Wazida-di.....aapse pehle parichay nahi huaa.....

bohat acha likha aapne....
hanste hue chehro se hai bazaar ki zinnat
rone ki yahan waise bhi fursat nhi milti.......
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«Reply #23 on: August 27, 2010, 04:24:19 PM »
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aapka swagat hai.Matrixji.....I will be waiting for your lines.......

koyal ji apne bht aacha likha he........

apne jo likha he uske jawab me kuch he mere paas kuch months pahle lkiha tha....agar mil gaya to post karunga....


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«Reply #24 on: August 27, 2010, 04:51:38 PM »
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mera bachcha......mmmuuaahhhhhh....gudiya rani...sambhal khud ko...
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«Reply #25 on: August 27, 2010, 08:58:39 PM »
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u r welcome ... n thanks a lot...!!!

Thanks kapilji.....good reply.........

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