Hum AASHIQUE.....

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DOSTON... aaj ashiqon ke dil ki likhne ki koshish hai .. aapke nazar kar raha hun ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayega...


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

har subah chahe kali ho, gham ki dhalti sham si...
har kohre maiN sooraj, har oos pe chand rakhte hai aashique..

kacchi rah-e-mohbbat pe chalte hai bekhauf jamane se
bajuoN maiN phool, jigar pe pathar rakhte hai aashique..


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...


dard-e-dil se rakhte hai chehre ko saza ke yun
sansoN se aah, hontoN pe uff na rakhte hai aashique..

likhte hai dastan-e-"saccha_pyar", dil ke lahu se...
wafa-e-mohbbat nibha, tapish-e-bewafai mai jalte hai aashique

jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

Kunal
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2005, 07:49:04 AM »
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DOSTON... aaj ashiqon ke dil ki likhne ki koshish hai .. aapke nazar kar raha hun ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayega...


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

har subah chahe kali ho, gham ki dhalti sham si...
har kohre maiN sooraj, har oos pe chand rakhte hai aashique..

kacchi rah-e-mohbbat pe chalte hai bekhauf jamane se
bajuoN maiN phool, jigar pe pathar rakhte hai aashique..


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...


dard-e-dil se rakhte hai chehre ko saza ke yun
sansoN se aah, hontoN pe uff na rakhte hai aashique..

likhte hai dastan-e-"saccha_pyar", dil ke lahu se...
wafa-e-mohbbat nibha, tapish-e-bewafai mai jalte hai aashique

jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

Kunal
wah KUNAL,bohat hi acchi nazm pesh ki hai,excellent.

"Aashiqon ka kya kehna,inke bina adoora mohabbat ka fasaana."
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2005, 08:04:54 AM »
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DOSTON... aaj ashiqon ke dil ki likhne ki koshish hai .. aapke nazar kar raha hun ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayega...


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

har subah chahe kali ho, gham ki dhalti sham si...
har kohre maiN sooraj, har oos pe chand rakhte hai aashique..

kacchi rah-e-mohbbat pe chalte hai bekhauf jamane se
bajuoN maiN phool, jigar pe pathar rakhte hai aashique..


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...


dard-e-dil se rakhte hai chehre ko saza ke yun
sansoN se aah, hontoN pe uff na rakhte hai aashique..

likhte hai dastan-e-"saccha_pyar", dil ke lahu se...
wafa-e-mohbbat nibha, tapish-e-bewafai mai jalte hai aashique

jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

Kunal
wah KUNAL,bohat hi acchi nazm pesh ki hai,excellent.

"Aashiqon ka kya kehna,inke bina adoora mohabbat ka fasaana."


wah!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  acche  kunal............................................ .
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2005, 09:35:14 AM »
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DOSTON... aaj ashiqon ke dil ki likhne ki koshish hai .. aapke nazar kar raha hun ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayega...


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

har subah chahe kali ho, gham ki dhalti sham si...
har kohre maiN sooraj, har oos pe chand rakhte hai aashique..

kacchi rah-e-mohbbat pe chalte hai bekhauf jamane se
bajuoN maiN phool, jigar pe pathar rakhte hai aashique..


jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...


dard-e-dil se rakhte hai chehre ko saza ke yun
sansoN se aah, hontoN pe uff na rakhte hai aashique..

likhte hai dastan-e-"saccha_pyar", dil ke lahu se...
wafa-e-mohbbat nibha, tapish-e-bewafai mai jalte hai aashique

jhuki palkoN maiN kai khwab rakhte hai aashique...
dhadakte dil maiN kai sailab rakhte hai aashique...
dolat-e-duniya ko thokar lagate hai har sadi mai
har taqat ke ke roobroo kai jawab rakhte hai aashique...

Kunal
wah KUNAL,bohat hi acchi nazm pesh ki hai,excellent.

"Aashiqon ka kya kehna,inke bina adoora mohabbat ka fasaana."


wah!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  acche  kunal............................................ .
kya baat hai Sahil ji good......

ashiquon ki hasti ko pehchante hai hum
usse hi mahobat hai hume usse khuda mante hai hum

zindagi khil uthti hai ek uske hi naam se
usse hi tuh apni zindagi ki shaan mante hai hum

kisiko kya batayen dard-e-dil Sandhaya ka
jo har gadi rulata hai humko usse hi chahte hai hum
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2005, 09:44:30 AM »
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nice u all frinzz
chahne aur rulaane ki baat mat kijiye
iss dil ki baat sun lijiyee..
humein pata hai ishq mein dard ke siwaye aur kuch mat lijiyee..
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2005, 07:45:00 AM »
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wah KUNAL,bohat hi acchi nazm pesh ki hai,excellent.

"Aashiqon ka kya kehna,inke bina adoora mohabbat ka fasaana."


shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2005, 07:47:09 AM »
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wah KUNAL,bohat hi acchi nazm pesh ki hai,excellent.

"Aashiqon ka kya kehna,inke bina adoora mohabbat ka fasaana."


wah!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  acche  kunal............................................ .[/quote]

shukriya wahid ji .. yuN hi sath dete rahiye ...

apka apna

kunal
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2005, 07:49:09 AM »
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kya baat hai Sahil ji good......

ashiquon ki hasti ko pehchante hai hum
usse hi mahobat hai hume usse khuda mante hai hum

zindagi khil uthti hai ek uske hi naam se
usse hi tuh apni zindagi ki shaan mante hai hum

kisiko kya batayen dard-e-dil Sandhaya ka
jo har gadi rulata hai humko usse hi chahte hai hum


ye sahil ji kouN hai ... sad5
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2005, 07:50:26 AM »
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nice you all frinzz
chahne aur rulaane ki baat mat kijiye
iss dil ki baat sun lijiyee..
humein pata hai ishq mein dard ke siwaye aur kuch mat lijiyee..


shukriya shameem ... aap aaye aur hausla afzai ki ...

aapka apna

kunal
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2005, 08:09:38 AM »
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wah KUNAL,bohat hi acchi nazm pesh ki hai,excellent.

"Aashiqon ka kya kehna,inke bina adoora mohabbat ka fasaana."


wah!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  acche  kunal............................................ .


shukriya wahid ji .. yuN hi sath dete rahiye ...

apka apna

kunal[/quote]

ur  welcome  saccha  pyara........................
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2005, 08:56:53 AM »
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sorry kunal dono ko ek saath reply kar rahi thi na tuh galati se tumhari jagah Sahil type ho gaya i am very sorry hope u dont mind
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