Hum raat jaagte reh gaye... .. . //annu//

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कि नींदे बड़ी सुकून वाली हुआ करती थी हमारी,
तुमने नज़र क्या हटायी हम रात जागते रेह गए.

कि धड़कन बड़ी मधम चला करती थी हमारी,
तुमने रुख क्या मोड़ा हम दिल संभालते रेह गए.
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2017, 06:08:55 PM »
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bohat khubbbbbbbbbb
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कि नींदे बड़ी सुकून वाली हुआ करती थी हमारी,
तुमने नज़र क्या हटायी हम रात जागते रेह गए.

कि धड़कन बड़ी मधम चला करती थी हमारी,
तुमने रुख क्या मोड़ा हम दिल संभालते रेह गए.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Very nice. If I was in your place, in the last line in stead of dil I would have said saans.
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2017, 01:24:58 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2017, 03:58:13 AM »
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Thanks Jeet ji!
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2017, 04:04:21 AM »
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Thanks Surindar ji... Your suggestion is welcome, it would also go with the thought. Keep sharing it!
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2017, 04:07:30 AM »
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Thanks Saini Sir!
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2017, 05:05:49 PM »
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Bahut Shukriya ... Rajan Ji!
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