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«Reply #15 on: December 06, 2010, 07:34:13 AM »
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Oye hoye kapil ji n kasak ji kya khumar bhare alfazo ka daur chal raha hai..bahut khoob ...Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: December 06, 2010, 08:04:19 AM »
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Kapil Bhai aap Bhi Kamaal Karte Ho.. Itna Khubsoorat Likh kar kahate ho ki Qalam Sath Nahi de rahi hai.. !!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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«Reply #17 on: December 06, 2010, 01:58:43 PM »
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sahi hai kill bill bhai... no disturbance... let them keep continuing...

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«Reply #18 on: December 07, 2010, 03:57:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil
Aap aur ANU ne bahut umda mehfil jamai hai
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«Reply #19 on: December 07, 2010, 03:58:05 AM »
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meri baahon me aake tu us pal kuch ghabraai thi,
fir dheere se mere seene pe sar rakh muskuraayi thi,
maine chaaha tha chum lena tere naazuk hothon ko,
par mera teri taraf badhna dekh tu sharmaayi thi...
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«Reply #20 on: December 07, 2010, 03:59:15 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Killbill ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

oye hoye kya kahne aap dono ke---
unn lamhon ki khubsurat yaadon me aap dono ka iss kadar kho jaana
dia hoga kin khusgawar mausam me ek dusre ko apne dil-on ka nazraana
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plzz stop nhi krna hume anand lene do..
bhot mast jugalbandi hai
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«Reply #21 on: December 07, 2010, 03:59:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Oye hoye kapil ji n kasak ji kya khumar bhare alfazo ka daur chal raha hai..bahut khoob ...Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: December 07, 2010, 04:01:02 AM »
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Mann ji ye to aapke aankhon ki khasiyat hai ki kuch bhi likhun aap pasand kar lete hain... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon sarkaar....!!!

Kapil Bhai aap Bhi Kamaal Karte Ho.. Itna Khubsoorat Likh kar kahate ho ki Qalam Sath Nahi de rahi hai.. !!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Behad Khubsoorat aur Pyaar bhare ehasaason Se Saji hui Aapki Yeh Poem Dil Ko Chhoo Gai Dost.. Bahut Umda aur Mohabbat bhari peshkash Hai..!!!

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«Reply #23 on: December 07, 2010, 04:02:03 AM »
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sharmake maine tere seene me hi muuh chhupaya tha
tune dheere se fir mera sharm se laal chehra uthaya tha
dekh kar meri palkein sharm se bhaari hokar jhuki hui
meri palkon se tune apne thartharate hothon ko chhua tha....
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«Reply #24 on: December 07, 2010, 04:10:43 AM »
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chhute hi tere bheege hothon ko maano kuch aisa hua,
barson se jis ki talaash thi maano kuch aisa chhua,
ek lahar si daud gayi tan badan me mere kya bataun,
maano us pal aag aur paani ka kuch aisa sangam hua...
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«Reply #25 on: December 07, 2010, 04:36:06 AM »
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chhuna tere labon ka labon se mere
ek alag sa hi wo ehsaas tha sanam
sab bhulake kho diya tha khudko tumme
hamesha ko hum tumhare ho gaye the sanam
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«Reply #26 on: April 29, 2011, 07:39:04 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji....!!!

Bahut Khub Janab Hriday Ji
Khaskar Yeh Lines Hume Bahut
Achhi Lagi...


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #27 on: April 29, 2011, 07:42:27 PM »
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aaj bhi wo haseen pal humein yaad aata hai,
yaad kar un lamhon ko ye dil dhadak jaata hai,
khuli aankhon se ab jab hum tumhe dhundte hain,
na paake tumhaari jhalak ye dil tadap jaata hai...
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«Reply #28 on: April 30, 2011, 12:48:03 AM »
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bht mast likhe ho kapil ji aap....
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tadap iss dil ki bas kuch din ki hai
jhalak ki zararat bas ab kuch din ki hai
sath hogi wo tere fir to din raat
tanha raaton ki bechaini bas ab kuch din ki hai...!!!
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«Reply #29 on: October 31, 2011, 01:45:28 PM »
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bahut din baad ek chhoti si koshish ki hai. shayad aap logo ko khaas pasand na aaye. ajkal kalam saath nahi de rahi hai... dekhte hain kab tak flow ban paata hai....!!!



ye lab tere bheege hue se kya qahar dhaate hain,
hum bas tujhe dekh k hi bemaut mar jaate hain,
chaahte hain khud ko sambhaale hum, roke khud ko,
par har baar hum is dil k haathon majboor o jaate hain,

kehte hain khud ko ye pyaar nahi kuch pal ka saath hai,
par har baar jaane kyun teri or khinche chale aate hain,
chhoone ko hum tere honthon ki narmi apne hothon se,
har har baar tujhse duur jaate jaate thahar jaate hain,

hum ye nahi kehte ki mohabbat buri cheez hoti hai,
par hum apne dil k fir se tut jaane se ghabraate hain,
yakeen hain tujhpe humein, teri mohabbat pe bhi,
aur hum dheere dheere tere aur kareeb aa jaate hain...


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Bahut khoob Hriday ji
Bahut acche ehsaas bayaan kiye hai apne..
Jee karta hai ek ek karke apki saari creations padhu aur padhunga bhi..
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