HUM TUM

by rookie123 on July 15, 2006, 02:26:47 AM
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HUM TUM. Guys This is my first post.

Jeevan kee safar mai HUM akele chlalee jaa rahe the
Lehron kee beech HUM apni jeevan ki naav liyee jaa rahee thee
HUMeee kyaa malum thaa jaanaaa Ki dusree chor see TUM bhi chalee aa rahe theee

HUM Kabhi asmaan ko dekhtee to kabhi dekhtee paani koo
Jaane dil kisse dhoond raha thaa apnaa bannnee koo
HUMe kyaa malum thaa ki TUM aa rahe ho HUM ko rasta dikhanee koo

TUM ko dekhaa aur dekhtaa hi reh gayaaa
Manzil koo dhoondtaa hua mai sahil pee aa gayaaa
sab teri ankhon kaa jaadoo chal gayaaa
Jo dil sambhaal kar rahkhaa thaa usse bhi gava Gayaa

Dekhtee hi TUMhee man mai yeh khayal aayaaaa
Bhagwaan nee TUMhee shayad fursat see hai banaya..
dekh kar TUMhe mai khud ko rok naa paayaaa
maukaa miltee hi HUMnee apnee dil kaa haal batayaaa.

TUMnee dill kaa haal sunaa aur kuch naa boleee
aur wahan HUM baithee thee apnee dil ka darwaazaa kholeee
TUM see jawab ayya kii dil to chata hai TUMhara hoo leee
Par jaanee kab kismat apnaa darwaazaa kholeee.

Par HUM nee bhi haar naa maani
sunatee rahe roz TUMhee apnee dil ki kahani
Man mai HUMneee bhi thi thanni
ki TUM ki doli HUMaree hii ghar  hai anni

Akhirkaar HUMaree pyar kaa jaadoo chal gaya
TUMhaaraa pathaar saa Dil mom ki tarah pighal gaya
Jaanee HUMarii kiss baad kaa TUM pee jadoo chal gaya
Jo bh thaa TUMharee dil kaa darwaazaa HUMaree liyee KHUL gaya

HUM TUM bhi is pyar kee dariyaa mai behtee chalee gayeee
Pata hi nahi chala HUM to bachhi kee baap ban gaye
Usse dekh manoo HUM TUM kee sapnee sach hoo gayee
Dekh usko ghar aangan sab khushiyon see bhar gayeee

Bus yahi hai HUM TUM TUM ki kahaniii
HUM ko TUM kee saath ek choti si duniyaa hai basaniii
HUM ko TUM koo ek baat hai bataniii
Meri Chahat tere liyee kabhi nahin hogii Pooraani

TOO aooo HUM TUM karen ek waadaaa
chaahee kuch bhi hoo badalengee naa kabhi Iraadaaa
Kyonki HUM TUM kee kishan hain aur TUM ho HUMari raadhaaaa
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2006, 02:39:56 AM »
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Excellent Rookie....Very good....

I think, Rookie u deserve a cookie for this effort... :D
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2006, 03:04:14 AM »
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Wah !!
Kamaal kar diya Rookie ji..


SD ke Cookie ke saath saath
Meri taraf se chocolate bhi..
Aapke aur aapki Raadha ke liye!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2006, 03:07:42 AM »
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Thanks for Cookie and Chocolate Usual Smile

Anshul K
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2006, 03:11:09 AM »
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wow first post wo bhi........just great!


welcum 2 yoindia....!
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2006, 03:14:11 AM »
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Arre welcome rookie ji..

Aur yoindia pe bhi welcome..!!
ye to hum pehle kehna hi bhool gaye!
he he Roshni sis ne yaad dilla diya!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2006, 04:04:50 AM »
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Welcome RookieJi aur bohat accha likha hain!!!
Umeed hain aage bhi likhte rahenge!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2006, 07:06:52 AM »
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bahut khoob ..aapne bahut accha likha hai...Rookie  ji

aapka yahan sawagat hai..... :D
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2006, 11:24:55 AM »
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Usual Smile Dhanyavaad doston Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2006, 11:28:21 AM »
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=D> superb  rookie  ji....  you r welcomed here .. enjoy n stay in touch....
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2006, 11:36:26 AM »
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hi rookie ji.. welcome to yoinda... apka yea per sawaget hai.. have funn... bahut acha likha hai ... keep up the good work with wonderful smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 22, 2006, 01:24:01 AM »
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Thanks Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2006, 01:09:51 PM »
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Rookie ji u r most welcome... have funn here...

Quote from: "rookie123"
Thanks Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2006, 01:12:00 PM »
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