Hume utna pass paogi

by nandbahu on October 19, 2012, 12:05:25 PM
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Tum kitna door jaogi, hume utna pass paogi
Humari chahat dekh kar, inkar kar na paogi

Prem ki shyahi se likha, dil pe apna nam dekhogi
Kitna rootho humse tum, ek din man hi jaogi

Ehsas mohabbat ka jab hoga, pass tum mere aaogi
Jo laxman rekha kheenchi hai, usse tum khud se langhogi
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2012, 03:27:30 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2012, 03:32:35 PM »
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Wow mindblowing creation.bahut khoob Nandbahu ji. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Hats off to you!
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2012, 03:46:24 PM »
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bahut khoob.......... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2012, 03:58:13 PM »
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thanx saini ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2012, 03:58:49 PM »
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dhanyavad madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2012, 03:59:31 PM »
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dhanyavad vimmi ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2012, 11:16:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob nandbahu jee
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2012, 01:01:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2012, 01:10:13 AM »
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Tum kitna door jaogi, hume utna pass paogi
Humari chahat dekh kar, inkar kar na paogi

Prem ki shyahi se likha, dil pe apna nam dekhogi
Kitna rootho humse tum, ek din man hi jaogi

Ehsas mohabbat ka jab hoga, pass tum mere aaogi
Jo laxman rekha kheenchi hai, usse tum khud se langhogi

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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2012, 12:04:25 PM »
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thanx mkv ji
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dhanyavad hriday ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2012, 12:05:22 PM »
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shukriya marhoom ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 17, 2012, 02:07:59 PM »
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bahut khoob, aap ki rachanayein simple bhasha mein bahut kuchh keh jati hain
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