Intzaar ..

by neelgold on March 30, 2010, 12:15:34 AM
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Anothr try .. let c noe if its on corrct place / nt ...


Hume tum se pyaar Kaal bi tha, Aaj bi hai  Aur Kaal bi rehnga
Kho gaye eh dost tum duniya ki beed main is kadar....
Paar hume tera Intzaaar Kaal bi tha, Aaj bi hai Aur Kaal bi rehnga.....
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2010, 12:19:58 AM »
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Yes dear you did it right this time.  Thumbs UP

Bahut achcha likha hai apne Neel ji. Nice work.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Keep it up. And keep posting.
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2010, 12:22:12 AM »
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Thanx................ finlly
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2010, 12:23:03 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on March 30, 2010, 12:22:12 AM
Thanx................ finlly
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2010, 12:41:15 AM »
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You are welcome...!!!
Quote from: neelgold on March 30, 2010, 12:23:03 AM
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