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Tu mujhse dur hi sahi per
Tere pyaar ko dil mein bssa rakha hai
Tere annsu kahin gir na jayen
Humne tujhe sambhal rakha hai
Ishq ka rog hi sahi lekin
Humne ye rog paal rakha hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2005, 09:27:43 PM » |
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Wah Kurriye kamal kitta hai!! Good one LHD!!
Tera payar hi to hai mera sahara
Dekhati hu teri najro se her kinara
Jo ho sath tera to kuch bhi mai kar jaau
tu kahe to asmaan ko dharati per le aau
dil mai teri payar ke phool khilaty hai
milati hai zindagi, jab hum tumse milty hai!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2005, 02:58:54 PM » |
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buhut acha likha hai lhd ji and pooja ji....really nice woridng keep writing
door rehna humari kismat hai
paas na aana unki kismat hai
dil mein dharakna humari kismat hai
dil ko dukhana unki kismat hai.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2005, 02:59:12 PM » |
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--- Masha allah --- Ladke_hain_duffer ---
Ger ladkon ko duffer samajhate ho toh un per marate hai kyun,
Husn ki yeh ada bhi narali hai, dur rahete hai toh tadapate hai kyun!
--- Poojaji ab aap ke liye -----
Dekh kar Husn ki himmat aaj banda mamnoon hai,
Aisa nahi bayan hota ki Husn ab magroor hai,
Ishq ki adat si ho gayi hai husn ko ab toh,
Batain bhi karate hain Deewane si ab toh!
--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2005, 07:56:52 PM » |
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Jab woh mujhse baat karten hain
Saari duniya ke log mujhse jalten hain
Aksar yeh kaha jaata hai unke bare mein
Woh to nazaron se qatal-e-aam karte hain
ab to yeh alam hai ki jab milti hoon unko main
Nazar kehti hai kuch aur log yuhi badnaam karten hain
Khuda jane kab khatam hoga yuun qatal hone ka silsila
Sab kyu unka aur mera naam ek saath liya karten hain
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2005, 08:00:40 PM » |
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Good one LHD!!!
--Apka Jawab BeNam!!---
Jab hum baat karty hai
chad tare sath sath chalaty hai!!
Kab Suraj akar hume darata hai
Judai ka wo lamha barra satata hai!!
dil mai ab to unke hi phool khilaty hai
zindagi mahakti hai jab wo wapis akar milty hai!!
dil ko karar rooh ko meri chain atta hai
wo bane mere manmeet, yahin soch kar jhoom jata hai!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2005, 08:17:32 PM » |
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too good.......pooja ji..........ladke....,benam jii...and nice off
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2005, 10:42:31 AM » |
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Tu mujhse dur hi sahi per
Tere pyaar ko dil mein bssa rakha hai
Tere annsu kahin gir na jayen
Humne tujhe sambhal rakha hai
Ishq ka rog hi sahi lekin
Humne ye rog paal rakha hai dil me basa k aapna banake ....... tune mujh per aahsan kiya,....... sach kahu tu mane na mane.... har din rub to pehle maine tera naam liya...... |
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2005, 02:11:04 PM » |
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woh chahta hai mujhe iss kadar
jaise kisi ne na kisi ko chaha ho
Pyaar ussi ko milta hai e-mere dost
jisne sacche dil se usse manga ho
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2005, 10:52:21 AM » |
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Bohat acha likha hai LHD,Pooja ji and Benaam aapni bhi bohat acha likha hai  . |
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2005, 05:15:21 PM » |
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Shukriya Nidhi ........ !!
Kisi aur ko ye nazar kyu dekhe?
Ke iss mein har dum baase ho aap
Kaise ho gawara iss dil ko koi aur
Ke dil mein saanse ban ke base hue hai aap
Ghair ka sapna dekhen ye aankhen namumkin
Khawabo ke darichon mein saje hue hai aap
Sochte hai tumhe ek Pal mein kai kai baar
Ab Paimana-e-Fikar mein bhi Bhare hue hai aap
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2005, 05:42:13 PM » |
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waaaahhhh....again very nice Pooja . "Nazar me tum is kadar bas chuke ho ab,
jahan dekhun tum hi nazar aate ho mujhe,
na jaane kaisi kashish hai is pyaar me,
mere dost har waqt hosh me laate hain mujhe."  |
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2005, 08:03:56 PM » |
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Nidhe wah bahut accha likha hai :wink:
samandar ki tarha mizaaj hai mere mehboob ka
pal pal badalti hui woh aadayen usski
aise hi to haara nahii main ne dil aapna
mere dil ko lubhati hui woh nighayen usski !!
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«Reply #13 on: October 04, 2005, 03:56:32 PM » |
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Nidhe wah bahut accha likha hai :wink:
samandar ki tarha mizaaj hai mere mehboob ka
pal pal badalti hui woh aadayen usski
aise hi to haara nahii main ne dil aapna
mere dil ko lubhati hui woh nighayen usski !! dil diya tujhe chaha hai tumhe janmo janam...... dil diya tujhe chaha hai tumhe janmo janam...... shayad kabhi talak hoge humare hoge ek pal k liye...... |
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«Reply #14 on: October 04, 2005, 05:13:56 PM » |
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wow Pooja bohat hi pyara likha hai and thanx....nice one tushar. Aaj main form me nahi hun :oops: 10min ho gaye shayri nahin ban rahi  ,phir kabhi likhungi. |
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