...Ishq me haare Galib... .. ./annu/

by annu_genis on September 23, 2012, 05:51:48 PM
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These emotions and feeling are coming from my experiences...

"Jab-jab hum kisi ke Ishq me haare Galib, Tab-tab ye yakeen aa gaya
Ya to hume mohabbat ka tareeka nahi aata, ya haseeno ko dil jeetna aa gaya"

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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2012, 05:54:19 PM »
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wah very nice.....
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2012, 06:04:39 PM »
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bahut umdaa,,,, bas Ghalib sahab ka naam hata ke apna naam laga dijiye...,,
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2012, 06:10:33 PM »
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These emotions and feeling are coming from my experiences...

"Jab-jab hum kisi ke Ishq me haare Galib, Tab-tab ye yakeen aa gaya
Ya to hume mohabbat ka tareeka nahi aata, ya haseeno ko dil jeetna aa gaya" icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch


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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2012, 12:36:24 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2012, 02:52:42 AM »
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Accha hai par..sher me apna hi takhallush use keejiye.

last kee lines dobara dekh leejiyega.
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2012, 03:49:38 AM »
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last line thoda confuse kar rahi hai ..par soch behtarteen hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2012, 03:52:02 AM »
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 Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2012, 06:22:10 PM »
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Gayatri ji...thanks!
Maun ...bahut shukriya

Nandbahu ji ...dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2012, 06:25:19 PM »
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mkv ji... durust farmaya, amal me laane ki koshish karenge

soudagar ji ...hausla-afzaai ka shukriya

Saini sir ...thankyou!
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2012, 06:28:57 PM »
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These emotions and feeling are coming from my experiences...

"Jab-jab hum kisi ke Ishq me haare Galib, Tab-tab ye yakeen aa gaya
Ya to hume mohabbat ka tareeka nahi aata, ya haseeno ko dil jeetna aa gaya"


sher dost humko bahut bhaya hai
per samjh mei kuch nahi aaya hai
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2012, 05:19:17 PM »
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Manoj ji... thoda personal case hai

I never wanted to fell in love with a girl, but then it happened and i was in Love (So I lost my heart to her)
But later I realised, that she doesn't love me and I gave my heart to a Indifferent girl... because, probably, I still dont know the right way of love OR the Girl knows better ways to Win my heart over
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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2012, 11:12:58 PM »
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Manoj ji... thoda personal case hai

I never wanted to fell in love with a girl, but then it happened and i was in Love (So I lost my heart to her)
But later I realised, that she doesn't love me and I gave my heart to a Indifferent girl... because, probably, I still dont know the right way of love OR the Girl knows better ways to Win my heart over
bura mat manna,
ek ne daali nahi aapko ghass
pahuch gaye aap dusare ke pass

       ye pyaar nahi,
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2012, 04:55:24 PM »
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@Manoj ...U still didn't get me.. my message talks about only One girl not Two
...bura mat maanana, par shayad aap Pyaar ki majbooriyon aur dard se waakif nahi
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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2012, 10:53:17 PM »
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@Manoj ...U still didn't get me.. my message talks about only One girl not Two
...bura mat maanana, par shayad aap Pyaar ki majbooriyon aur dard se waakif nahi
ha sahi kahte ho,mei pyaar ka dard se wakif nahi

sirf itna kah sakta hu

pyaar shabd mei.n jab pa aksar hi adura hai
bhala kaise kisi ko pyaar mil sakta pura hai


mere dost ka ek bahut khubsurat sher hai


dard se kuch is tarah naata raha
        ke dard ka ehsaas hi jaata raha
bhukh ka kaise khulasa kare hum
        jism aksar jism ko hi khata raha
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