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logon ko aksar ye kahte suna hai
pyar main dilon ko toohte dekha hai
nadaan hain woh jo ye kehte hai
ishq main dil kya cheez hai
deewane tu apni zindagi fanah kardete hai.
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2006, 10:40:00 AM » |
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logon ko aksar ye kahte suna hai
pyar main dilon ko toohte dekha hai
nadaan hain woh jo ye kehte hai
ishq main dil kya cheez hai
deewane tu apni zindagi fanah kardete hai. nice one kaiynath, keep writing and welcome 2 yoindia  |
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2006, 11:47:12 AM » |
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very well written!!!! welcome here!! KAHTE HAI DO DILO KI MOHABBAT ME KHUDA NAZAR AATA HAI. TO KYON TOOTTE HAI DIL AUR KHUD TERA WAJOOD BIKHAR JATA HAI.  ?? |
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kaiynath
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2006, 01:23:54 PM » |
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Apni mohabat ka gila hum kisse karre
koi sunne waala na raha hum kya kare
dil tha ek saathi woh bhi bichad gaya
ab tu tamanna hai marne ki hum jee kar kya karre.
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kaiynath
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2006, 01:26:23 PM » |
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thank u very much burning_desires and myheart_ursonly thanks again
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2006, 06:14:09 PM » |
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very nice kaiynaat... and BD
woh mohabbat hi kya jo halki aandhi pe jukh jae..
woh dil hi kya jo zindagi ki aazmaish pe ruk jae..
hoti hai mohabbat kya us bewafa ko sikhaenge...
itna asan nahi dil se khilwad..haar kar nahi jee kar dikhaenge..
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2006, 08:07:34 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Kaiynath, BD & Mehek....
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2006, 12:57:29 AM » |
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kya baat hai mehfil jami hui hai.............lo mein bhi aa gaya.............
Ishq bhi zaalim sitam dhaata hai,
Kisi ko laila toh kisi ko majnu banata hai,
Dekha tha kabhi ishq ko iski gehrahi se,
Shayad isi liye dunia me har shaks,
Is nacheez ko Badnaam Shayar bulata hai....
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2006, 04:06:39 PM » |
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badnaam_shayar aap plz hume ye baataiye ki aap badnaam kis liye huye.
woh apni rah par se wapas lauth aate
magar humne unhe kabhi pukara bhi nahi
woh chehra hamara dekh kar rukh jate
lekin hum ne kabhi apna chehra dekhaya hi nahi.
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2006, 05:03:43 PM » |
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hmm nice work kaiynaath.. ishq mein hue badnaam jaane kitne... gar kuch majnu farhaad hue... toh kuch bangae charaagh-e-roshan toh aisi mehfilien aabaad hue.. what say gaurav...  |
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2006, 06:29:03 PM » |
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very nice kaiynath and mehek yeh lo jawab..............
Badnaam galion k Shehzade hoon mein,
Bin aankhon k manjar ka nazara hoon mein,
Kuch na khoya kuch na payabas lutata chala gaya,
Sawaar hoke Ishq mujhpe sab kho k bhi sab dila gaya,
Sab kuch jeet k haarna wala Shayar hoon mein,
badnaami k andhere me gum Badnaam Shayar hoon mein.............
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Gesu
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2006, 06:36:24 PM » |
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gr8 mehek ji and badnaam ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2006, 06:51:38 PM » |
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badnaam ji apka jawab
aandaz behekne lagte hain
honton par shararat hoti hain
aankhon se pata chal jaata hain
jis dil main MOHABAT hoti hain.
kyun kaisa laga!!!
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2006, 06:55:01 PM » |
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hum ne hi shararat ki
isiliye hum ne hi saaza bhi paayi
dil dard main dooba hain
aur aankh bhi nam hain.
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